Pretty good.

OMG, it's beautiful. Really, it is... I even cried. At such a short fic, you are truely marvelous. This is the second short fic to make me cry. Keep up the good work!

Oh, this is so sweet! I love it!

Great fic but Squall DOES have a mother but she died so that's why he goes to an orphangage. He also has a father. His mother is Raine and his father is Laguna but Laguna was in Esthar when Squall was born and then...

Awesome fic. I love it!

Loved the beginning...heehee... how fun! The story was really nice. Lovely ending. Keep writing. I love these shorter fics. I can never seem to keep it short. Mine just keeps rambling on and on and on... SEE there I go again. Love yas! Great job.

Interesting. Very very neat idea. Nice ending and explanation as to why Squall couldn't get rid of the necklace presented at the beginning. Very touching. I loved it!

Ok, but WHY THE HECK DOES IT SHRINK?

Well, pretty funny, the whole 'branded' thingy, heh heh, and it does sound one hundred percent Rinoa.