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this was really good. any chance of a sequel?

awe I love it amazing story

good story.

ow! how cute and charming family you've create! very good job; it was easy to read and really interesting!

Horay! Great story, it was so cute! Harry's animagus form sounds adorable! Love this stroy.

There's no such thing as "hereditary Animagus skills." Sure, if a parent is good at something then his/her child may learn it easier than other children, like Severus and his mother both being brilliant at Potions, but the child still must LEARN it. Sometimes, wizarding children can do extraordinary magic when they're in danger, (Harry did when being chased by Dudley's friends, and Neville did when his uncle hung him out a window.) so it would have been better if you'd explained Harry's transformation as one of those magical flukes that very young wizards are capable of.

It was fine for you to have Sirius know that Ollivander would be one of the only wizards to believe in Sirius' innocence, though you didn't explain HOW he knew.

Also, Harry's identity couldn't have been changed, for when Voldemort rises again (as he definitely will since you did nothing in the AU to change THAT part of the storyline) the presence of The Boy Who Lived is what gives the majority of the Wizarding World hope.

This isn't an awful fan fic; if it was I'd never have read it to the end. In fact, the grammar in it is quite good. However, there are many things you could do to improve it.

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i usually hate AU's, but this is a really cool idea, and you write so well that you can pull it off! yay!

Reading this was really interesting, though the time skip was sort of abrupt but it's a good thing that you know how to work with it I see. Thank you for sharing this FIC with us.

Ok, listen. This is the best Harry-adoption fic I have ever read. I am not kidding. When Remus transformed, and then Harry did (into a puppy, no?) I could not stop 'aw'-ing at the the cuddleing cuteness. Then, the whole Ollivander thing made sense, and no-one was ooc. You're awesome. Don't stop writing. seriously.

Harry's pretty trusting for someone who has lived up surrounded by adults who abuse him, isn't he? Other than that, really good story! Keep writing!

Is it possible for someone to be born an animagus? ...Who cares? Just the thought of little baby Harry wolfie makes me melt. Awe!

I liked Harry's reaction to Remus saying that he should lock himself away, but I really don't think Remus would ever come close to having Harry near him on a full moon. He would rather leave him in an alley than keep him with a werewolf, an action that would undoubtedly cause his death.

Not quite as attention grabbing as the last chapter, but still good. I liked how Notice-Me-Not charms don't work as well on kids as they do on adults. Kids see an entire different world out there that many of us have lost long ago. I thought Dumbledore might have been more angry about Remus taking Harry. I mean he's just been removed from the one place in the world where he is truly safe from Voldemort. And if he doesn't live there then the protection's no good ever again. Plus he's, well, kidnapping him. He's gotta loose brownie points for that. I like Dumbledore's reaction to Dudley's revealing Harry's living situation (and it was nice how Dudley revealed it. He was so innocently helpful).