I'm sorry but I don't really consider that an ending. If you're planning a sequel, that's one thing. If not, it's kind of a cheat to the readers.

You can't just end it there! There are too many loose ends to tie up.

Please tell me that there is a sequel!

I loved this weird PF story. Very other worldly! Do they make it home?

You have to write a sequel to this! Do they make it home??

Update your story!

This story is great.

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Post the next chapter soon!

Still really enjoying this. It's just so different from everything else.

That was so good! I want to know if they make it back home, and what happens when they do. Maybe even if they remember their quest? Update!

Loved Jill's reaction to it all and how Kenny and Max's relationship is changing.

This reminds me of Alice in Wonderland. Fall down a rabbit hole, and into a whole other world.

Looking forward to chapter 5!

Mermaids are awesome. I think Max is liking all of the weird stuff that is happening to them. She seemed quite content as a mermaid. Is that going to effect them getting home? That maybe they want to stay?

Update!

Where the fantastic can happen. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Only in Rome, WI would something happen like that! Wow-I am sitting on pins and needles here. Does Kenny and Max get back to their ordinary lives in the sleepy little town of Rome? Or does the Wizard die and they have to stay in this place forever? Please update!