Well, it was a bit flowery and overwrought for my tastes, but the concept was nice.And you did paint some beautiful images. The one I loved the most was "More drops fell on her cheeks, deepening her eyes in a black mask.". The description was so striking that it took me a moment to interpret it and realise you were referring to her eye make-up.

I hope I'll see more of your stories floating around here.

OMG this was brilliant! I loved it, especially the ending. Very sad (

Hi! That was a really nice piece you did-I almost feel sorry for Gatsby. I kinda don't like him as a character, but you did a good job. A very good point of view on Gatsby that I never considered, but I haven't read much or thoroughly enough. It's really sad though, him being left alone, and his love isn't returned! I actually have never read any fanfiction based on this book, so yours was the first! Thanks for a good impression. I'm actually here because I wanted to see if there was a category for this book, because I just wrote something for my English Lit class as well, yesterday as a matter of fact. I guess I'll take a few minutes and post it. Thanks for motivating me!

Always,

Margaret

I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this. I just finished reading The Great Gatsby, and I loved it. You did a really good job of capturing Gatsby's thoughts. I especially liked the fact that this was done after he died.

Oh, this is so sad! I liked this, it was sweet.