An amazingly well written story Hemlock. A true murder mystery; compelling and intriguing 'til the end. Well done, you write Remy wonderfully.

ooh, this is getting good. pretty scary the way you've got remy literally beating himself up over this. frightening stuff. i'd get further on this, but i'm kinda tired. i'll review later in this.

this was good i mean very good

wow. hey i found something to say!

wow

Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed both stories in this series.

WOW! Great job.

This was an incredible story! I loved it! Touching ending! I love when villians have understandable motives.

Those tendril things are scary! Yikes!

BRAVO! A great ending to a great story! You truly have a knack for writing (especially the horror kind), and I hope you'll write some more after you take a break. Kudos!

wow! this was a very powerful story..

this is getting kind scary in a good way!

Thank you for posting soon! I'm so anxious to find out what will happen next!

what the 'ell . . . Long Spoon? Geez, the only spoon I've seen is the one Ray was playin' with. Your story rocks, by the way. I'm intrigued. Even though I gave up fanfiction for lent. :)

Dude, I really dig this. It's entertaining and well-written. Bravo, mein fruen!