 Faerlas 2005-03-12 . chapter 4All four were good! You used free verse right? It's not my favorite style, but I really liked your poems. Good Job! |
 Jane 2005-01-29 . chapter 3 Beautiful description of the beckoning Frodo felt and the need to be healed. |
 Jane 2005-01-29 . chapter 2 He does try and you have captured his need to be redeemed. |
 Jane 2005-01-29 . chapter 1 Nice way to capture the feeling of the character. |
 lordoftheringsfanficreader 2005-01-10 . chapter 1Interesting poem. It brings the feel across well, but you could have used a little bit better wording. I like it a lot, though! :)
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