This is a fantastic story. I felt Lily's pain.

Oh gee... This really makes you wanna read HP again. I can't even begin to thank J.K. Rowling for the world she created. Oh gee... Like I've said before, I love the way you write. You make it seem so... vivid!

this is great it is so original i wish i could write like you please write more i want to know what three defiances neville's and harry's parents made against voldermort.

SAVANAH

Its really good, I like your style of writing, and like the "Lily's eyes" outlook. You write so smoothly, and I wish I could write like you ! My writing is so disajointed, and awkward. Keep writing!

Monica and Ray ( Rays my brother who made the stupid pen name, and I have to live with it- groan)

um...so is this going to carry on? what did they do?

apart from that, i'm loving this. it's so beautifully written..i think its so sweet...i think you portrayed all of the charachetrs perfectly...and the language you use! you sound really intelligent! i really admire people who can write like that. i love this, it's so amazing. it's absolutely perfect. and it is so well written, seriously...great job!

I think this story was worth the wait, it's an incredible plot that's very well articulated and, as far as I can tell, original. Please post more chapters soon, I want to know what three defiances Harry and Neville's parents made against Voldermort!