Haha I loved it! I can truthfully, DEFINITELY see the kids making this an actual movie. It feels like it was already made into one.
Great job!

I kind of liked the format of the story. It could have used some work (or maybe it was written that way for some effect) I would love to see that aforementioned WitchHiker poster.

Yay, Home Movies! I love that show, I don't care if it's cancelled. This was really funny, especially the dialogue between the kids at the end. It totally seems like a conversation they'd have. There aren't a lot of Home Movies fanfics here, and this is one of the few good ones. Be proud.

-Waki

that script is definitely something i picture Brendon writing! nice job...i hope there is more to this

Haha, that was cute, and very funny. I think you definitely captured the essence of Brendon, Melissa, and Jason.

Lol! That was perfect! Totally something Brendan would write! And the little convo at the end, it was totally in character...

I wish there were more Home Movies fics like this...or at all, there's only like three as of yet...

Anyhoo, awesome fic! ^_^ Ciao.

Ha ha ha, funny. That's just the srt of thing I'd expect one of Brendon's movies to be like.

heh, funny.

I just imanged it like it probally would've happened if it were in the show. What with the missed lines and bad camra angles and...stuff...

Anyway, I liked it, hope to see more.