please
continue im waiting for what happens next

:DOWN ON KNEES BEGGING AND WEEPING: PLEAZZE CONTINUE

THIS SUCKS, YOU UGLY B*TCH!

PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!! I've always wanted to know where you were going with this story. Please wirte a second chapter soon.

Hm... very interesting story... very interesting. I can tell this will be good, but could you add a little more description.

Also, I have an idea... for the next chapter you could start it off with Gohan going to sleep after a long day of shopping... with Rini and keeps on waking up and dreaming about a kingdom of whom he never had heard: The Moon Kingdon.

He doesn't understand the dream but he does see and older version of himself with a girl that resembles Rini... later on, after meeting some of the people of Rini's school... he sees a girl save a kid along with an older girl and because of thier power they are unrecognizable but decides to watch the battle to see what is going to happen.

After some events... after staring to miss home, Gohan goes back to bed but has a dream of his father only saying to him:" She's your destiny"

Well anyways I gave you an idea.. very good start of a story and i can't wait til you update!!

Now THIS is an interesting role-reversal. Usually stories like these involved a charcter from the SM world (most likely Usagi) as the betrayed fleeing to the DBZ world. It should be a nice change of pace to see it from a new perspective.

awesome update soon

To be honest I had forgotten about this story just a few months ago. After so many months of delay I might have thought you've discontinued it... Anyway even though this Passinby character obviously has no life if he/she goes on flaming on every story you made, you really shouldn't take this person seriously. As long as he/she don't give any sort of good critism, pay no attention to this troll. It opinion don't mean anything. I really like your story hon, and I'm hoping this kind of mess doesn't stop you from continuing this and other of your current stories.

With that outta the way, on with the story! I'm still pretty curious and excited about how your gonna handle the whole pegasus-thing, and how it would effect Gohan. That be interesting to see. So Gohan's going shopping with the girls eh? Can't wait to see how that turns out. XD

Anyways keep it up and hopefully the next update will be the next chapter. Don't let those flaming jerks get to you. :)

Oh my God. After all these years of forgetting about the Dragon Ball Z and Bishoujo Senshi fandom, you have sucked me back in! I love your fic (well, the first chapter), so update soon so I can read more of it! Gah. It's been such a long time, I don't know if I remember everything from these two animes. I'll have to dig out the books from the deep abyss that is my room. You explain things well though. I love your writing style, and Gohan with Chibiusa is my favorite couple. I'm lucky I stumbled across your fic instead of some of the crap that's out there. I guess I kinda missed reading this stuff! GAH! Rambling! Summary of all this crap: Loved your story, demand you update soon, and KILL THE FLAMING **.

I think Dende would still be one of Gohans friends, Gohan saved his life and they've always been friends, so I hardly doubt that'd change.

Otherwise, although that was a very small 'problem' if even, great fic!

...Some people have no livs if they're flaming you, I actually like your fic, and if they don't like it, why in the name of hell are they reading it?

Hmn, 'why in the name of hell' sounds kind of dumb, like Sailor Moons in the name of the moon I shall punish you, that always made me cringe. Oh well.

All the same, I'm going to go review the first chapter now...

yay! Chibiusa and Gohan!

What exactly is Gohan's whole purpose in the Sailor Senshi's world? To get away from Vegeta and the others? To protect the girls from the Dead Moon Circus? Or maybe some other threat? Well... the story doesn't look so bad as far as I can tell, and I don't really mind the pairing, in fact I love it. I never really thought of these two together.

Hope you'll continue to write more, it hasn't been updated in months.

hmm, it looks promising.. the betrayal thing looks kinda similar to a Gohan fic I read before... can't remember the title. -_-

Ah well, please write the next chapter soon.

Hey Amber! I was browsing through your site and I found your FFN link! So, uh, here I am *grins*

Anyway, about this fic... I think it has a lot of potential. I haven't read too many Chibiusa/Gohan fics so I'm glad I found yours! I think C/G fics are cute, too :P

If this story takes place during SuperS, you can have Gohan and Helios compete for Chibiusa's affections or something. I think it'll be interesting ^^

Hope you update soon!