i love reading axc fics with dearka and yzak!
wehehe i also like the brotherhood": "Cagalli ' The little sister they never had, or thankful they never had'"

haha. its so cute^^

that was really good.

hehehe.. that was sweet and funny! XD.. although you might want to read the story again for some of the little mistakes.. anyway, keep up the great work! i love it! ^_^

Lol, Yzak does hate Athrun but yeah, I think u overdid it on Yzak swearing at Athrun every chance he gets, like they r friends just that Yzak considers Athrun his rival. Luna, on the other hand, I don't really care coz even if she does like Athrun, she doesn't cling to him like Mia. This was a nice one-shot, I enjoyed reading it. Well, plz continue to write great ffs! Oh, btw, this is ur third fic that I've reviewed in the same day but it's probably the last too coz I have to get off the computer now.

aaw its soo cute! its really cute and funny espeacially with dearka and yzak! i love ur fanfic u should make more short stories like this one!

aww... sweet... but next time pls leave out the undergarments... Yay! cagalli and athrun forever!

Kawaii! I loved the fic!! dearka and yzak are so funny hehehe... athrun+cagalli and lacus+kira are the best loveteams ever... ok.. ja.!! thats all for now.. ^_^

I loved your idea of having Cags as a gift!! AHAHAHAHHAHAH!! (falls down...) owwie... (...on cotton candy) WE!

yay, love this fic!

ha ha ha its so funny, and i like it
I like ur writing style , nice job ^^!

very nice story .. I couldnt stop laughing while I was reading it ^.^

I like ur writing style .. cant wait to read other story .. ^.^

Good work

hehe... i liked your story a lot.. it was so funny! hehe... i liked how u said Lunamaria was a hooker... i dont like her that much... lolz, and Yzak was just so funny! hehe... i liked the romance part the best... hope u write more!

I swear that I read something similar to this a while back. Or at least similar in a way. But besides that, you desperately need to fix up this story. First of all, it's rushed like hell. And second, the grammar is messed up like hell too. Before you post somthing, at least take some responsibility for editing it. Stories that have have bad grammar like this usually suck crap.

That was funny xD. I enjoyed it, I don't mind it if they are OOC I enjoyed the story.