Now this has been fantastic. I absolutely love the dynamics between Ock and Clair, and will be back to read the third installation as soon as I've done my painting homework...

Hay this was excellent, better than any other fanfiction that i do, they are all crap, but your one is the best.

You Rock!

Nice story, any reason why anyone would help a bad guy I just don't get it.. I'll keep reading it's very interesting!

Once again, more quality work from you and Yume. Your addiction has become my addiction, as I can't wait for more chapters. Keep 'em coming!

Otto an' Claire are so cute togetha'...

Just when it looks like things are almost over, the plot thickens. Excellent! I need more! *grins*

This has been great Lady Holmes.

Nice chapter I really like it.

Ah, now it's Otto's turn to nurse an invalid back to health... This, I can't wait to see... Great chapter!

Aargh! Claire got SICK! -pats Claire, offers over the counter panacea-

Good chapter, Yumagari and LRH. Kudos to Skylanth too for the mechanical precision. I can't wait to see what happens once Claire and Otto reach New York.

Great chapter I like it.

Hullo! For the past day and a half I have been one of those irritating people who reads stuff without reviewing any of it, but lo! I have broken my radio silence to inform you of the very significant fact that this story is very cool and that, henceforth, I shall be devotedly following it to its conclusion.

And I am channelling that Monty Python guy right now... Uh, John Cleese. Yeah.

Anyway, Bottom line: love the story, keep it up! (Yay for good grammar, spelling, and style!)

Good.

As always, lovely writing. Addictive... just like the title. :)

J

So, passing through Michigan, are they? *cackles* I'll have to make sure Otto never leaves!

Ahem, sorry. Nice chapter; I can see these two are going to make quite a volatile pair. Otto can't be easy to put up with. But I'm sure Clair can handle him.