|Reviews for Forgotten|
| Joe B 3/11/13 . chapter 2
| Joe B 3/11/13 . chapter 1
| Cara2012 6/9/12 . chapter 2
Very nice story I like it
| Joe B 3/4/12 . chapter 2
Very well successful!
| Lady-Indis 8/22/09 . chapter 2
Awe, so sad! It would awesome if you did another chappie :)
| callietitan 6/25/06 . chapter 2
yah, at least noone died. can u write a sequel, i wanna see how it would be if Goku stayed. y'know with all the veggie and goku kawaiiness? please? i'll be your best friend!
| Gem 2/28/06 . chapter 2
I love the song you used one of my favorites
| GogetaJr 3/29/05 . chapter 2
This is so sweet.. cute.. I liked it! Good job!
I was actually considering doing a song fic to Missing too... but then I was told that you did one! I had to read it! You wouldn't mind if I did one too would you? It wont be the same as yours dont worry...
Still, that was a really cute story! I loved both chapters! *claps*
| Mako-Magic 1/24/05 . chapter 2
poor goku, thou that was so mean of vegeta!
| A Dreamers Death- Dead Account 1/12/05 . chapter 2
Siece you read all three of my poems I though I return the favour and reviews one of yours (I would review more sorry but I am in a rush) and I must say this is a brillent story.
I am going to add this to my faves if you don't mind you do have a talent in writing, well done, keep it up.
| anime-queen46 1/7/05 . chapter 2
Its a little depressing but still good please keep writing
| Keruri-chan 1/7/05 . chapter 1
Not bad. Most of the fic is the song rather than the story itself, which was kind of disappointing. It also took me most of the chapter to figure out that Goku wasn't actually dead. When Vegeta arrived, I thought he was dead too, because he could see Goku. Then I finally realized what was going on. Vegeta was also a bit OOC. I highly doubt he would say, "I'm going to miss you." I understand how this ties in with the story and song, but I don't think it should have been Vegeta who said so. Or perhaps you could have made it more subtle, more harsh, more Vegeta-esque.
Just a tip: When Person A finishes speaking and Person B starts to talk, it's always a new paragraph (in regards to "“Vegeta?” I question in shock. “You should not be here Kakarrot..."). It can sometimes lead to confusion. ]
Overall, a good chapter. It was kind of sad but still touching, and very introspective. Good work! n_n
| Lights Dying Fire 1/7/05 . chapter 2
Very touching. (Again)
Hope to see you update soon.
| Galacia 1/7/05 . chapter 2
I loved chapters one and two
It is nice to see how things are on both sides of the window so to speak. Will there be more or will this be the last chapter?
(whispering softly: I hope there is but if not oh well i should be satisfied with what i got.)
thanks for a great story
| Jay FicLover 1/7/05 . chapter 2
Very interesting... Would you consider going on with it some more?