Well, is not very historical beacause I think (and many historians think the same) that Alexandros and Hephaestion were lovers for all their lifes, but it's so well written! It made me to tears. Great.

This was so sad. *sniff* So very sad.

;_;...it's so sad...but well written, I really enjoyed reading it!^^

I love your story and the way you describe it so vividly but since i totally adore hephaistion so it is hard to accept that he is so weak and make a suicide. Please write more on Alexander and make him suffer for Hephaistion loss.

Oh.. poor Hephaestion..!
But all that made sense.. why would he mixed up water with wine??
Do you think it was kind of a suicide?
Or maybe he didin't knew..
strange but 8-)
I don't think it was Roxane.. but Bagoas..
I hate him!
^^ I disliked him since the beginning ^^, not like a suspect of homicide but.. his looks!
¬¬ I don't like him..
Hephaestion is so much of a cutie ^^!
GaB

this is really a sweet and on the same time sad piece, even if i relized it just at the end, i hope you'll write more.
i love if alexander is appologizing to hephaistion, because he really doesn't take too much care of him and his feelings. (even if he is dead in your fic)