mbm

this a nice little story... Ei! so good! good!

Very interesting. I liked this. Very nice work here. You did very will Soi's personality as well, along with Yui's.

Checkmate is an apt title for this! Very cool story man! I can see how Yui wants Nakago's attention.

I actually liked this story quite a bit. I think you should continue it, if you can. I never really liked Yui, and I think Soi deserves to be with Nakago, dying for him and all that.