I liked this a lot. The imagery is done well and your characteriation of Herimone seemed accurate.

I think I might cry...I love it.

it was draco talking wasnt it i no it

Aw..that was very cute. I really liked that. Great job. Too bad Harry had to die. :(

Oh my. This definately needs a tissue alert. Well done. I can quite imagine Herminoe saying all those things. I liked that Severus was able to save Remus and that Hermione and Ron want to name a kid after Harry or his parents. I do hope you will do a sequel.
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Again, well done.
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Thank you.
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That was so sad. ;_; {wa)
It was good though. I like the way you wrote it.