I have to say this, please keep writing thunderbirds stories from the movieverse. yours are the best one's yet.

Brilliant!

When I read this story I found it hard to believe that your first language isn't English as you write in English better than many people for whom English is their first language. Great story and I can't wait to read more from you!

Another FABulous recomendation from Agent Five. I really liked how you portrayed Scott in this story. Shows us that the proud, confident young field commander isn't all that he seems. You handled his doubs and fears beautifully. I felt as if I was there inside his head, experiencing it all. Wonderful!

woh.. so short. OK give us another one. More of Scott,please... thanks!

Yet again another excellent story! Keep up the good work!

Excellent! Looking forward to Jeff's story.

This is a lovely end to a lovely story. Between this piece and Recovery, you've managed to create an excellent fill in for that void in the movie. The dialogue between the brothers is so smooth, and I absolutely love the way that you handle Scott and John. You have a wonderful handle on their personalities. :D FAB.

I can't wait for story three. Hop to it! ;)

Okay, so you maintain a high standard to the last paragraph and then you tell us there's story 3 on the way ... are you a god? Your work is amazing. Thank you so much for the joy of reading it!

Can't wait for the next story if it's as good as this one and the other one.

Wonderful end to a wonderful story.

A gentle, happy ending for this story. Thank you for another enjoyable read:)

Another great ending to a great story. I'll be waiting for the next one!

I like your light touch with the angst. While I enjoy nothing better than bashing a character sometimes, an over-heavy dose of it is like too much salt on the popcorn. You left me wishing that there was more-and that's the way it should be.

Another great chapter. I love the talk between Scott and John. It is so wonderfully written. I love the line about being back in the saddle and Scott telling John that Thunderbird 1 isn't a horse. I had to smile at that and its great tension relief in an otherwise tense, and powerful chapter. Nice job!