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| Baitdcat 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abusethank you!that was a heart warming family story, it reminded me of my dad. thanks! |
| Ryoko-onee 2002-11-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was just plain heartwarming. I loved the family scene thing. Keep writing! |
| Eli 2001-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseDammit! Thison's good to! No fair. I wanna be able to write this well! Ryoga and Ukyo forever! |
| astroboy23222 2001-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseAfter all the depressing Ukyo fics out there, we finally have one where she catches a break. Well Done. |
| Saggit 2001-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute story. I like the plot a lot, but think the tale itself could have been lengthened considerably with more descriptive elements and inner dialog. Fun piece, though. |