being a fan of magi-nation, I'd have to say that this story is great, please write more soon.

HA! I knew I'd find some other magi nation fans eventually! Great story by the way; there's little enough MN fiction out there as is, and not nearly enough of it is this good.

As a fellow player of MND, I am happy to say how much I liked reading this, which is a lot. :)

well...I don't understand the story..cause I never played before. But I like were it's going! Hope you update soon koi! Keep it up!