Hey! _

awesome poem! (as always!) this is kinda like raven's pov, right? anyways, your poems rock!

Keep writing!

xxpunk-rock-chick02xx (formerly atrappedlonelysoul!)

wow, i really missed reading your stiff! _ great job once again, rock on!

me

wow...great last couple of poems. I think they are getting more interesting. Sum have you know, verse type parts in them, and that makes the rythm of teh poem really flow more than just a poem. kinda like a song or sumtin.

This was marvelous, different from your other poems, that's good. It means you don't always use the same writing style, nice job!

Keep being inspired,

TTS

I really liked this poem. Hope 2 see your story chap. up soon :-P write more ASAP

I liked it but not as much as your other work it was still good you can't mistake that and it's good you tried something new and original. I just liked the other thing you did more i mean this one is well fit together and appears to be in perfect shape but i liked your other work. But if you want to try something new and if you like it i hope my comment diodn't bring you down or change your mind i just thought you might want to know m,y honest opinion rather than saying i loved something that i didn't love at all. But IT IS GOOD don't forget that.

Keep on Smiling

Jade

awesome! I love your repetition of words; some people try and do that and it just sounds stupid but it works in this poem! My favorite lines were, "Breathing now? No...Falling deeper into myself...Hearing nothing anymore." great job!

keep writing,

-DKR

I like way the poem is written... every four line... the verb changes... and the [kind of] free-style rhythm... you're finishing up D.I.E... well... it was good while it lasted...

but... be happy!... summer vacation is coming up... so you'll be able to write and live your life!

i love the recent poems you posted _ i also havent been that relaxed this past week x.x; and thats the reason i dont update much anymore o.o; but anyway, keep writing, and i'll be supporting you

Hay... u never told me about this poem and if u did... my ad well i like it a lot

Tell Raven of the night that it was an excellent poem and she couldn't have done a better job also tell her that she's a great poet and i can't wait for another update

Keeo on smiling

Jade

I would say this is a Raven P.O.V. Wow I lvoe this poem. This is my other favorite poem by you. The best part was how the beginning and ending were the same. That was amazing. Anyways why is it that everyone writes poetry during math? I do the same in my algebra class. Hm ... maybe that's why i'm failing. Well good job. Please write more.

Wow this is probably my favorite poem by you although all of your poems are exceptional. This was extremely sad but I liked it all the same. I'm thinking it has to do with Raven and Beast Boy and Terra right? Well anyways extremely awesome poem. I love it. Good job.

It's good, but die from old? I think you made a minor error, but hey that's what reviews are for-to point out the faults.

Awesome job, I LOVE the ending.

keep being inspired,

TTS

O.k. So, I really liked all these poems! They are all really good! I noticed a trend of Raven based pov, but that's good as I think she's my fave! Have you got any on Robin? Something delving into his past as Batman's sidekick or something about him going over his future as Nightwing would be cool! Well, till next time! :)