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Black Winged Lady
2008-08-06
ch 12,
abuseWell thats not a good ending lol...Does her family find her? What about her son? Is Naraku playing them all? and why if he is?
xiDOREyoux and CrimsonTears
2008-07-12
ch 12,
abuseWow, i was kinda expecing more for the ending, since the middle part/ climax was so good and depressing...and plus, since you story oine made kagome suffered so much, i means, she deserved a hapy ending since she suffered but whatever. It would be great to get a sequel, hey, can't expect too much. good job on the writing though, it was beutifully detailed, i almost cried...
Yaoi-Lover-24
2008-06-23
ch 12,
abuseIt was so sad I actually cried when I found out what happened to Kagome. Since Sess/Kag is my favorite pairing, I was shocked when I didn't want them to end up together. He really didn't deserve her.
w0ah
2008-04-23
ch 12,
abuseWOW! amazingly written. i really liked what this story was about and how you wrote it. whatever you wrote about like makes me think about the situation and i cant forget the story like idont know how to explain it but like it was so good that its still stuck in my mind. your a really good author =)
TheDarknessAroundMe
2008-02-13
ch 12,
abuseWow... that was depressing. Good writing, thanks for posting.
demon prince-sesshoumaru
2007-09-17
ch 12,
abusewow this story is so freaking good. there were a few sesshoumaru/kagome i consider really good. and the once and futrue taiyokai was of them. i'm glad i can add this to that best sesshoumaru/kagome stories. thanks for the great story it seriously touched me and my friend.
springscents
2007-08-11
ch 12,
abuseI must say that this story is awesome! Not in the happy go lucky way, but in the tearful I want to wail way.(I actually did wail for about 20min after finishing it. T_T) I got hooked on the first chapter, and read all of it in 4 hours! I like the way you build the story up slowly and keep me in suspense. I also like how your story isn't like most, where somehow Kagome just miracuosly (sp?) gets better. I also like the dark side of this fic ^_^ I love your writing!
Sesshou's-koiishi
2007-08-02
ch 12,
abuseHello! I really enjoyed reading your story. It was a real tear-jerker! I really like the way it ended. Like there could be a sequel, or it could just end. A sequel would be awsome though! Great job!
black-lotusblossom
2007-07-19
ch 12,
abusewow.

what a ending; very open.
but this is the kind of endings that i love.

i say very well job done.
CatH
2007-07-11
ch 11, anon.
abuseI seem to have lost track of the sequence - Kagome moved into Seshoumaro's house (their own house) but they were not sleeping together, since at the time she was raped, you had written that she was a virgin when Sesshoumaro did the dastardly act. Then later, you had written that he went to the room they shared together...so I was wondering about the logic in that...I thought he was disgusted already with her so he wouldnt't have shared a bedroom with her later after the rape, and if he shared a room with her before the rape, it seemed it couldn't also be possible that they just shared for the sake of sleeping?
CatH
2007-07-11
ch 10, anon.
abuseI've read thru the earlier chapters, its a good angsty story. Maybe I'm being too logical, but after what he did to her, shouldn't he expect her to be in a hospital or something, and not just wait up for him conveniently with a book in her hand in the couch? Its either he is delusional or its just the stress...
aries vs. leo
2007-06-27
ch 12,
abuseMUST WRITE SEQUEL...great AU
hazel
2007-02-15
ch 12, anon.
abuseman i cried and cried and mann this is really good!!
Charmc18
2007-01-15
ch 9,
abuseum.. i don't understand how chapter seven got into this... ish confusing! >.< how can they not ever meet when they head a son together? i'm totally lost.. i think you should read 6 and 7 and you'll understand my confusing...
Rachster
2007-01-12
ch 10,
abusedid they clean the blood? hmm...
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I started to cry right there...
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