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| Black Winged Lady 2008-08-06 ch 12, | abuseWell thats not a good ending lol...Does her family find her? What about her son? Is Naraku playing them all? and why if he is? |
| xiDOREyoux and CrimsonTears 2008-07-12 ch 12, | abuseWow, i was kinda expecing more for the ending, since the middle part/ climax was so good and depressing...and plus, since you story oine made kagome suffered so much, i means, she deserved a hapy ending since she suffered but whatever. It would be great to get a sequel, hey, can't expect too much. good job on the writing though, it was beutifully detailed, i almost cried... |
| Yaoi-Lover-24 2008-06-23 ch 12, | abuseIt was so sad I actually cried when I found out what happened to Kagome. Since Sess/Kag is my favorite pairing, I was shocked when I didn't want them to end up together. He really didn't deserve her. |
| w0ah 2008-04-23 ch 12, | abuseWOW! amazingly written. i really liked what this story was about and how you wrote it. whatever you wrote about like makes me think about the situation and i cant forget the story like idont know how to explain it but like it was so good that its still stuck in my mind. your a really good author =) |
| TheDarknessAroundMe 2008-02-13 ch 12, | abuseWow... that was depressing. Good writing, thanks for posting. |
| demon prince-sesshoumaru 2007-09-17 ch 12, | abusewow this story is so freaking good. there were a few sesshoumaru/kagome i consider really good. and the once and futrue taiyokai was of them. i'm glad i can add this to that best sesshoumaru/kagome stories. thanks for the great story it seriously touched me and my friend. |
| springscents 2007-08-11 ch 12, | abuseI must say that this story is awesome! Not in the happy go lucky way, but in the tearful I want to wail way.(I actually did wail for about 20min after finishing it. T_T) I got hooked on the first chapter, and read all of it in 4 hours! I like the way you build the story up slowly and keep me in suspense. I also like how your story isn't like most, where somehow Kagome just miracuosly (sp?) gets better. I also like the dark side of this fic ^_^ I love your writing! |
| Sesshou's-koiishi 2007-08-02 ch 12, | abuseHello! I really enjoyed reading your story. It was a real tear-jerker! I really like the way it ended. Like there could be a sequel, or it could just end. A sequel would be awsome though! Great job! |
| black-lotusblossom 2007-07-19 ch 12, | abusewow. what a ending; very open. but this is the kind of endings that i love. i say very well job done. |
| CatH 2007-07-11 ch 11, anon. | abuseI seem to have lost track of the sequence - Kagome moved into Seshoumaro's house (their own house) but they were not sleeping together, since at the time she was raped, you had written that she was a virgin when Sesshoumaro did the dastardly act. Then later, you had written that he went to the room they shared together...so I was wondering about the logic in that...I thought he was disgusted already with her so he wouldnt't have shared a bedroom with her later after the rape, and if he shared a room with her before the rape, it seemed it couldn't also be possible that they just shared for the sake of sleeping? |
| CatH 2007-07-11 ch 10, anon. | abuseI've read thru the earlier chapters, its a good angsty story. Maybe I'm being too logical, but after what he did to her, shouldn't he expect her to be in a hospital or something, and not just wait up for him conveniently with a book in her hand in the couch? Its either he is delusional or its just the stress... |
| aries vs. leo 2007-06-27 ch 12, | abuseMUST WRITE SEQUEL...great AU |
| hazel 2007-02-15 ch 12, anon. | abuseman i cried and cried and mann this is really good!! |
| Charmc18 2007-01-15 ch 9, | abuseum.. i don't understand how chapter seven got into this... ish confusing! >.< how can they not ever meet when they head a son together? i'm totally lost.. i think you should read 6 and 7 and you'll understand my confusing... |
| Rachster 2007-01-12 ch 10, | abusedid they clean the blood? hmm... [quote]Home.[quote] I started to cry right there... |