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Barranca
2009-10-24 . chapter 14
This story might be sentimental, but this is what makes it so moving. And when else to pour out one's heart if you cannot do it in the company of dead people?
I must admit though, Kenshin's last prank totally blindsided me o_O
Barranca
2009-10-24 . chapter 6
I was already starting to think that we are only going to see Kenshin in flashbacks, and what a tragic story it would have made.
t42n24t2
2009-10-23 . chapter 14
I just read all fourteen chapters and cried through most of them. You write in a way that makes people feel, and that is a rare gift indeed - for I seldom cry. Thank you for a touching story. Hope you continue it.
Sonia120462
2009-10-10 . chapter 14
rele good! update!
D3athrav3n92
2009-10-02 . chapter 14
You should really continue this. I love all of the emotional conflict you put in here! It's great!

Keep writing!
-D3athrav3n92
Dreammaker Twilight
2009-05-19 . chapter 14
Oh wow... amazing chapter. -.-" I still don't get it completely, but I'm not sure if it was supposed to make sense in the first place... -.-"

So if this isn't the real chapter 14, does this mean that Kenshin'll "make Hiko not forget about calling him his son" for real next chapter? =D
Katie
2009-05-06 . chapter 14
Gaa! I should have noted the date before I started reading this again. Nevertheless, that was one funny April fools chapter! I am looking forward to more!
kingleby
2009-05-03 . chapter 14
lol, great chapter! really funny.
Althea M
2009-04-03 . chapter 14
What?! What!? Gr!! I hate this day. Too Strange!

Feed my hunger!!

AM
omasuoniwabanshi
2009-04-03 . chapter 14
Good one. You really had me going until the fishnets and the scene from Ghost.
Kenshin's Soul
2009-04-01 . chapter 14
"Then the wolf leaned in, smiling gently and whispered in a soft, almost inaudible voice, “Wait till we get to the yaoi, Shishou…” There was a wicked gleam in the wolf’s lavender eyes."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Oh my gods! I LOVE it!! Saito wearing nettings on his arms! Priceless! The poor guys got punked by Kenshin!! XD Way to go, Kenshin!!

Great job, SiriusFan13!! That's a great idea for an April Fool's Day joke!!

SiriusFan13 and lolo popoki, you two are masters of this!
Draconic Ban-Sidhe
2009-04-01 . chapter 14
Ahaha - loved it. The fishnets were priceless, as was the imagine gleam of revenge. Very entertaining scenario - in both stories. And it is nice to know that a long awaited update will eventually be forthcoming. =) Yay!
skenshingumi
2009-04-01 . chapter 14
You got me on this one. I never saw "Ghost" so I didn't get the references but I appreciated the explanation in the AN.
It was a good trick but I admit, I was really looking forward to a real chapter. I am happy to hear you will both have new chapters soon.
Now on to Lolo Popoki's parody of "Amethyst and Amber".
thelazyreader
2009-04-01 . chapter 14
lol. I really got suckered in by that last bit.

I read your story quite a while ago and rather liked the father-son relationship you established between Hiko and Kenshin. I was, however, rather curious about two things:

1)Exactly how Kenshin intended to atone through Hiko, considering he's sworn not to kill(and by extension, cause any more deaths) while Hiko has no such inhibitions.

2)What romantic pairing will this fic have? Kaoru's only a child here, so will it remain Kenshin/Tomoe(Yeah, she has Kiyosato, but if you have eternity to spend in heaven and had multiple lovers in your lifetime, can't you share?)

Considering the story won't address these for a while, would you tell me a bit about them?
Terry-McElrath
2009-04-01 . chapter 14
You got me! Cold. I didn't even suspect that this chapter was an April Fool's Day joke until almost the end. I guess that says a lot about my gullibility. Anyway, that said, I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter. Especially since the reference to yaoi was only a joke. I think that Kenshin deserved the opportunity to get back at both his Shishou and Saito. Go, Kenshin! You did a great job on this, SiriusFan13! Thanks for giving everyone a treat! I'm really looking forward to lolo popoki's real chapter 14 and can't wait to read it!
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