Oh, I love it. Very cute. Keep it up. I love Baralia's character.

ah laughing so hard here. I love how lighthearted gippal is, and how he expects the entire world to move along with his lightheartedness.

so sweet! :)

You evil, twisted, disgusting, maniacal **! But you're a damn good writer and I can't ignore that. I DO NOT read slash but you are the ONLY person who has convinced me to like it. OK, I'm in love with Gippal, but I can take him being gay when there are brilliant authors like you hanging around on this Godforsaken site. Me like you. Keep writing.

That was funny... in such a dumb way... ^-~

Wow. You really do write Gippal well. I think all of you are starting to warm me up to the whole Baralai/Gippal pairing.

LMAO! Shnookums... *snicker* This was actually pretty cute, and I usually shy away from Gippalai because they're usually very graphic and badly-written. But I trusted you. You're extrememly good at capturing POVs and keeping everyting IC (since OOC-ness is my major pet peeve). One question, is Baralai going to be gay in Cfaadraynd? because I was kinda looking forward to a Yunalai :p ~S

SBQ: That was so funny! I strangely wouldn't stop laughing at Paine being referred to as butch chick.

Gippal: "LIKES TO TAKE IT IN THE **" That is so true!

Baralai: Gippal, don't talk about our private lives.

SBQ: It's a sweet and comical fic. I like it. Gippal is just so funny.

I cracked up at anything Gippal was thinking in caps. Oh my god... Hilarious. You've captured him perfectly. I love the end, too, with the line, "Fake Baralais don't breathe like this, do they?" and the last thing about the gaydar. Go, go, Gippal and Shnookums!

You should have put a warning in the beginning before you posted saying I shouldn't drink anything while reading this. I fear I have spit seltzer all over my monitor and keyboard. That was so funny! I think you handled first person POV well. I myself don't like using it either and know what a pain it could be. This was most excellent! Thanks!

Perfect and perfectly lovely. I was smiling all the way through. This Gippal with his version of universal love is absolutely in character. And it is easy to see Baralai as the sly tease. Writing humour would seem to be a stretch for you and you made it! Now, don't hit me, don't make this just a one-shot.

I question the use of the term 'Gaydar'. It has become a cliche. (Well, I had to flick you on some point.)

How adorable!

That's about all I could say.

You're sure you can't be convinced to elaborate? You really do have such a great handle on both of them..and their situation. Your voices are so direct as to be real and I don't remember when I've seen either written so...realistically.

No matter how it comes to you, you transcribe it as beautifully as always and it was a joy to read.