cool story
it was a very cute ending
good work

of u could make 1 of theese of the folowing shows id be ur bigest fan
fma
inuysha
shamon king
bleach and naruto

I really liked this story on my list of favorate stories this is 3rd which is excellant considering all the stoies iv'e read so good job!!

great story, i love it.

It was a very good story keep up the good writting.

BRAVO another wonderful story.

You're evil for making us go through that.

Wonderfully executed .

AAH HER WATER BROKE! gotta get to the next chapter.

The plot thickens

PLOT TWIST! And now the story truly begins. (That's what I think.)

Now I'm really worried, and something tells me you know this stuff from experience.

Oh my. I'm worried about how this is going to turn out.

Wow that was so good!! I can't wait till the next book. Told ya I would read it. You did a great job. I was freaking out about Kim worried if she would make it or not and she did!! That story totally rocked. That was so wonderfuk of Shego to save Kim's life. I can't wait to read the next. Have to go now Mom needs help but it's no big! I'll add this story to Team Possible Headquarters right away! Thanks again for a very moving story!! :)

I love it can't wait for the next story.

First of all, good ending to the story; can't wait for part three of your series!

P.S. Thanks for that mention there at the end...I'm more than happy to lend a hand or just offer support for my fellow fanfic authors!