Brilliant story you have here! I'd love to hear more.

Great chapter! muffin if you update!

Maid of the Mer

hurry,hurry times almost running out-i sound like a person in the comercials-hurry! i want to read i like reading Broken!plz,plz,plz,plz,plz!me read me read!

poor sick baby - hope you get better soon

for the story - more, more, more

Really like your story.

Maybe let Jean have the hots for Logan but Logan is with Lumina now. Or whatever comes to your mind, you're the writer.

oh! please keep going! i love your plot so far and i'm always curious about how different people come up with ideas for logan's past. keep it up!

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Can't wait to read what happens next.

All the possibilities...

I like it that Logan and Lumina are somehow connected, even if it's through Stryker.

more please

I like your story.

Maybe Logan gets to know Atma and 'the Others' better before she heals, would be interesting.

Hope you update soon.