WOW! Amazing fic! *le glomp* So...so good!

Commenting on the whole story - I thoroughly enjoyed it, Phaelas.

Although *my* Bagoas loves Alexander, he likes Hephaestion. (Could have gone either way in the beginning... Hephaestion was always the 'kind' one.)

The only part that bothered me was Bagoas WANTING the threesome. But I can live with that. You might want to check out 'Dance of Betrayal' on my LJ.

Afraid I don't 'criticize' very well... Love your character portrayals and your story lines!

*sigh* Oh what fighting. Felt sorry for everyone. Atleast Alexander and Hephaestion made up.

HI!
i love the end, it was so sweet :D!
i wish a continue of your fanfic, hephaiston and alexander are a cute couple, they are nice! jejeje im sorry if my writting isn't very well:p im not very good in it, i will be better jeje
bye! good luck;)
ShIhArU tEnDo
/*miembro de la orden siriusana*/

Hi!
Oh.. I loved Hephaestion..
Why did he left?
I'll read the sequel :P
GaB

“Let’s not ever do this again? I don’t like being such a demanding lover.”

Now Alexander couldn’t suppress his laughter. “You don’t? Since when?”

ROFLMAO! This was too cute! Sad to see the story end, but I loved that the last chapter dealt solely with A/H. Will definitely check for the sequel.

Re: movie Hephaestion vs. yours, I agree. I think the real-life Hephaestion had a bit more (lot more)spitfire. He would have had to, I think, to be able to deal with Alexander on a daily basis.

Tionsbabe

hi!
well i think your fanfic is so cute!:D:D:D:D it is the first time that I read a fanfic in english and I think I chose the best one, it is cool, please continue it! I love hephaistion, poor, he is pretty and Alexander is so bad with him! i hope that he can change,jejeje! it will be the Hephaistion's wish! :D
ok good luck!

ShIhArU tEnDo
*miembro de la orden siriusana*

me not happy :( you finished story. you write more or die painful death...
Okay, seriously now, very nice work. just longer chapters, please? I liked the idea. And a sequel would be nice indeed ^_^

Oh.. my god, I'm sad that this story has come to an end, but you picked up the right point..
Very well. I'll see you at the sequel then! (and sorry for my horrible spelling in the last few reviews, I just didn't re-read them before submitting)

Oh, I'm loving this story. I agree with Gabo0, though. What is with Hephaestion and the apology to Bagoas? Alexander must have looked at him like he'd lost his mind. You're doing great! I actually feel for Bagoas! *stunned* He's in love with Hephaestion. Sigh. We understand. :-) Love your unique take on that particular triangle, and I'm tickled pink that Alexander knows that Hephaestion is the one that Bagoas is in love with. *grin*

Even though Bagoas knows Alexander and Hephaestion love each other deeply, he must still be feeling quite powerful that they argue over him. When he says, 'Hephaestion is yours. I'll tell him that,' I couldn't help thinking 'Uhh...I DOUBT he needs you to remind him.' *meow* LOL.

Can't wait for Chapter 9!

Tionsbabe.

Wow! These latest two chapters are brilliant. Anyway, thank you for your reviews - they really brightened my day, darling.

You seemed to have really captured the characters as they should have been in the film, and as they probably were in real life. The mark of a great fanfiction writer, it seems, is to do this with full and utter confidence, and to succeed. Therefore, no one could call you anything but a great fanfiction writer.

I know what you mean about the movie. My mum and sister hated it as well - especially the scene with the elephants dying in India. I, however, thought it was one of the greatest I've seen...Ah, well. Apparantly there's no accounting for taste!

Write well - Katatonia

HI!
Loved this..
Bagoas like Hephaestion.. ^^.. hope Phai isn't asleep ^^U, so he heard..
Anyway.. gtg
Keep posting
GaB

This is turning into such a nice three way character study. The voices stay true to themselves and you maintain a woderful tension. Thanks.

>>Does it apply to sequels as well?
Oh yes indeed! ;)

Btw, I'm not a native speaker too... I really envy you for your good English.. Writing is always so hard.
Btw.. I love it when Bagoas calls Hephaistion Blue Eyes.. that's so, so cute.

Hey Phaelas,
just found this story and so loved it!
The way you write is just... sounds just so authentic. It's great, really. And for the first time I like Bagoas, being a great Hephaistion/Alexander fan myself.
Your story really gave me a clue why the heck Alexander was going for Bagoas like that. Just so Hephaistion wouldn't have him. Well... mayber, that is...
Anyway, great story! Keep it coming! Can't wait to read more!
moonstrucked