Schrödinger's hawt

An interesting story, till now;

I simply wanted to add a few corrections for the German parts:

shit, of all that I must deal with.

Scheiße, daß ich mich ausgerechet damit beschäftigen muß! (I have to take care of that, of all things)

We will crush them under our boot heels - Wir werden sie mit unseren Stiefeln zerquetschen! - No heel. Alternative: use 'unter unseren Stiefelabsätzen'

I do hope we'll be seeing more. This is most enjoyable.

Great Fanfic! Keep it up!

Dear God! thank you for such a fanfic! -bows down-

I loved this one,the story line is so well written. I'm aching for more!

Just a few things. I believe Samiel is Zamiel, I'm not fully sure, but that is what was in the manga.

Also I think the sentence:"Her hair drifted in the wind, the one curl defying the wind.." Could be "defying it." or any other concoction that doesn't have to use 'the wind.' I don't mean to nit-pick, it's in my nature ;;

Anywhosit, I lurve this! Keep it up 'kay?

Thank you so much!

I only found a tiny typo: Fraulen is Fräulein. :)

*Looks around, itching for more.* That was great! I must have more! Don't make me go into withdrawl! You can't be evil enough to do that, can you? It was good, though. Keep it up! _