 Lord Kelvin 2005-01-06 . chapter 1This story has a very deep meaning and lots of brilliant thoughts inside. I like the total unknown you've put the reader in, but it could be better if you'd write who's POV is it here. You also could have used apostrophes or quotation marks for the What are you question.
I do hope you'll continue and give a few answers to the questions this story made me wonder about.
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