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Scarabbug
2005-03-16
ch 1,
abuseOkay… I had a feeling reading this wasn’t a great idea since I normally know better than to freak myself out like this, but, what the hey I read it anyway. you have just redefined the meaning of the word weird. Can I say INSANE PAIRING?
But the way you did it made it work very well. Nice one. Just... insane. Yeah. Insane...
Rick Siggelkow
2005-01-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseBy combining the fairytale of the toad prince with the odious Staff Head, and by casting Sparx in the princess role, you've come up with a very clever and funny story that the audience would have immediately understood and appreciated. I wish one of the writers on the series had been as inventive. But what happens next? Does Sparx fall for the prince/staff head? Would Ace have become upset? What about Lord Fear? Would he finally acknowledge how much he needs Staff Head and drive him and Sparx apart for his own selfish reasons? Or was this all a plot to get Staff Head into the Thunder Tower where he can turn on Sparx?

I look forward to reading the next installment.

Don't worry about sounding a little sappy. It's consistent with the balance that the series tried to strike with the Ace/Lady Illusion romance. Once Lord Fear, Googler, or Random Virus arrives, all the sap oozes out of the scene.
hyperpsychomaniac
2005-01-05
ch 1,
abuseHe he! Brilliant. I was very scared when I read the summary, but this is great. Glad to see I have such an influence on you :D ...though that's probably not a good thing.
I love the 'drop dead georgous pile of spunk'!
Lynxie
2005-01-05
ch 1,
abuseBwa ha ha ha!! That truly is the only way to pull of a romance like that!

Though you definately must to do the bet version. There are so few chances for Sparx to kick but unhindered by Ace's presence...
Blue-Inked Frost
2005-01-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was funny! A very unlikely romance. I have to admire you, v.v. rare pairing! A few spelling errors, odd metaphors, and, er, I have to comment, "pile of spunk?" Um...gutter, my mind, please. Anyway, that was so cute! (You still haven't explained the Cockney accent though...)
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