I think Harry (as Evan in the past) should've been more friendly with Snape, Remus, and Lily. They could've been the other Marauders.

I freaking loved this chapter.

This fic is bloody fantastic! I agree that the cutting scenes wer a bit weak, but I think that they are still relevant to the fic! I look forward to updates in the future!

Woah, those are some bad-ass spells!

No, don't make the Marauders split up! I love them too much! Just look at my pen name!

The last thing Sirius said rhymed! Not to sound as if I'm flattering you into doing whatever, but can you please not randomly give up on this story, like so many other people whos fics I read today, it's too awsome for that!

Although I am saddened that you have stopped writing such a good story, I can only wish you well as you set out to write a new one. The only thing I ask is that you keep as it was: a non-romance, no couple kind of fanfic. I have enjoyed what you have created so far and look forward to what you write. :) -D.

This story was amazing, it's such a shame that it was discontinued. I really enjoyed reading it and the idea of this story is fantastic. The characters are wonderful and the storyline seemed very well thought out. I liked the way you wrote this.

When I was reading one of the earlier chapters I realised that I strangely recognised some of the dialog. After I read this story I went over to the rewrite and as it turns out, I actually read parts of that one before this awhile ago. So isn't that interesting.

Anyway, this was a brilliant story, thanks for writing it.

Your story has been added to the community You Could be Great, You Know... This C2 contains stories where Harry is sorted in Slytherin.

I absolutely love this story, and I will definitely be reading the sequel as soon as I've been away from this story for long enough that they don't blend together in my mind. I really enjoyed reading what I think was a unique, well-written, and interesting fic with fascinating characters and tons of plot twists and secrets. It's awesome!

Love. The bumblebee prank was one of the most brilliant things I've ever read in fanficdom.

I love your story and looking forward to reading more. I hope you had good ideas soon to continue this. The title so far didn't really suit the story i think because he's dark angel side only appear a little i think. :)

I personally liked the suicidal Salazar, because it was just so sad that it made you feel for him. :( Poor Sal. And please don't take Ginny out? I like her as Helga (also known as El if you want to give her a shortened name). Some people are just Ginny haters. Now admittedly, I hate her trying to date Harry, but not as just his friend or surrogate sister. I really liked quite alot of this story. I couldn't find anything that I really didn't like, to be honest. I only hope that you can stay in the mood to write the rewrite because I love Harry is Salazar stories more than most types. :D Anyway, I'm going to go start reading the rewrite. Hope you don't feel at all discouraged.

I do like your story but, the title doesn't suits it. It would be better if you change the title but you got my interest in reading this fanfic. I hope you continue writing this...I am slightly looking forward reading it.

NephyRiddle, I have read this fic twice now and have enjoyed it both times. I was thinking of perhaps adopting this story, if you could lend me any information regarding this story as I want to keep it true to the way you had it planned

- Bwilla