Nice and dark, the way human Freddy should be! Just don't go overboard, or the staff might poop their pants and take this one down too!

I wish this would continue it is great.

D. S.

Please update! I have read some of your stories before and they are very good like this one. Do update and i'll be keeping a eye on this story.

I really like the idea behind this story, and your depiction of Freddy's personality is spot-on. Very chilling and canonical.

I just have one real problem with the fic- some of the sentence structures are awkward. Some of the adjectives used don't fit what they should be describing, and this makes the reader's mental image of what's happening in the story unclear.

I think this is a great story, so I'm not trying to flame you at all. I just think that maybe a beta reader could be helpful here. I wouldn't mind beta-ing for you, if you'd like! :)

Please, if you wish to, feel free to contact me. My email address can be found in the link to my ff.n profile.

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

OMG! that's so good please update soon and by the way HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

well bye

p.s you're a talented writer I hope you wirte somemore stuff.

Love it so far. Update soon!

Hey, guess who?

Great story as usual from you. I love the way you are writing this story and the idea of it.

Well happy belated birthday then. I am in the market for an NOES beta (so i looked @ your grammer too.) :-) Good story!

great! i really loved this chapter! i loved it how u wrote freddy! please keep going! oh and happy late b-day!

Brilliant. You finally updated, what a glorious event!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

very well written. please update soon!

I love it already. It's so funny with the whole Krueger family, getting their pictures taken. It's so descriptive, what will happen? ..

Very well written, and a good idea. I would love to hear more, you know.