This story was really great and I'm waiting for your next work.
I had a some problems with the last chapter. I really missed Ryoko. And I'm not so sure about what happened to the baby.
Hoppefully, he/she is right. Bye!!

Holy crap!
Holy crap!
I know I'm repeating myself but...
Holy crap!
Every now and again, if your lucky, a body stumbles across a story that just blows you off your chair and through the back of the wall behind you. For me personally, this is one such story. The sheer scope of it. The detail. It's ability to affect my feelings. 'Awesome' is the only word that comes to mind. The raw emotion in CH6 between Tenchi and Ryoko still makes me shiver. The entire story is amazing! At the same time, I feel insanely jealous of your talent. In a good way, of course. It gives me a level to aim for. As I continue my way down your list of work, I hope you continue to find inspiration enough to write more. And often. Damn fine work! T

Wow. Thats all I can say (well Im gonna add more) I loved It and I carn't wait to see the follow up to it (I Hope you do it)anywho I know you said you were gonna kill of Ryoko but being a Big Ryoko fan It still hurt (Like the Ep NNF Ryoko TV/Universe which I cryed yes a 21 year old man can cry) the amount of emotions you used were almost on par with Krin Dreamweaver (plz tell me you've read his stuff) anyway this is a review for the entire fic not just chapter 15. Keep up the Great work

Your fellow Nekoshiper
Andrew J Connell

This has to be the greatest story I have ever read, it's a master piece, I'm talking A+ material!

This fic has had me on the edge of my seat for along time now and it was worth every second :D

Again this is a master piece.

Wow! This was a heck of a finish for this Book, and honestly, was really great to see Tenchi and Ryoko have a happy ending at last. Loved the whole sequence, nice to see Azuza finally start to act as a family member instead of a royal, as well as how things went on. Looking forward to all of your stories, and hope that you have a good year overall. Again, a wonderful part, and loved it.

I'm truly touched that you found my name worth mentioning at the end of your masterpiece. I'd like to thank the Academy and the Hollywood Foreign Press for this great honor. You guys are great. My producers and my agent. And all the fans. Thank you and goodnight. Free Tibet.

Seriously, it was a long wait, but well worth it for what was delivered. I'll admit I was poised to hunt you down and drag you back to your computer on leash to finish the story after the first month or two. But hey, you came through for me -- and more importantly, you came through for yourself. I suppose I should be thanking you. The machete and tranquilizer gun I was looking at were ** expensive.

Relax, take a load off. No sense trying to write yourself out of a funk. Give yourself some time to loosen up the spirit and the imagination. There's probably something witty and clever about a karmic wheel I could say at this point, but I've got a feeling it would be none too original.

Just repeat after me: I will continue my Tenchi masterpiece eventually. These aren't the droids you're looking for.

Before i start my review, I’ve just got to say that my arse has gone numb from sitting for so long while reading this final chapter, if you can call something this long a chapter, i'm going to need to walk this of for a bit...

ar, that’s better!

Right, after a highly anticipated return the final part has come, and wow, bloody hell that’s long, and damn if it wasn’t brilliant, it’s like a tour-de-force of what came before, all the good character development and description, the twisting plot, suspense and surprise, the brilliant battle scenes laid out to bring this alternative take of the Tenchi world to life, there all there. Even after its great length, its still an absorbing tale, with Sheia being added as a new love interest really being a master stroke, as even up to the end I wasn’t sure whether Tenchi really would get his first love back, and then whether he would risk everything and everyone to do it. Would Ryoko return was a question that hung heavy on this last chapter, and you strung us along brilliantly. Tenchi’s interaction with the rest of his family was also brilliant, although it did highlight my one complaint about this last chapter, and that’s the lack of appreances by Ayeka and Sasami, I think there only really seen once in this last chapter and it would have been nice to see more of them, in particular interacting with the Tenchi once again after his rampage and recovery. Of course this is really just nitpicking.

This is a brilliant story and I would recommend it to any and all who want a damn good read, well done Nomadicone, I’m glad that you found a comfortable sitting position and I hope that you have perked up since last you ranted, or at least your back has got better and that you got a cool cane (evil laugh ha ha ha)

After the endless time of waiting, finally I'm supposed to witness the update...^^ GREAT I really like it, and I'm looking forward to read some more of your fics.
sayo

I love the characters and suspense you bring to the tale and the family interplay adds nice depth. Those Star Dragons are pretty cool.

:)

Hiya and thanks for the support.

Good stuff again. I love the dialog and characters. The scene changes add a real sense of tension. Those creatures at the outpost - way creepy too.

:)

I really love the depth and background that comes to the story. The settings are really fascinating.

Ok you got me, this is definitly my fav fic.
I never Thought someone would write such a good story, I'm impressed an happy even when I have more fic's that I like almost like yours, but at this moment it is really the best. And I've read many TM! fics, even when I didn't make a review on all.^^ So I'm looking forward for the next chapter ( I hope there would be a "few" more) and now one of my favorit "Spells" when you don't finish this I'll hunt you down ;) ^^

Hiya! You have such a great diversity of emotions and characters here and I love the dynamics.

Oh, the little stuffed bear was so cute.

Nice battle with Ryoko. Neat skills.

That was very sweet.

I'm glad your back.

Hiya!

I'm not familiar with the genre, but this was a nice intro and I'm willing to R&R anything that's well written. You really build a great descriptive pallet for the story.

The characters are rich, vivid and natural. You have a nice, easy style of writing that allows me to visualize the dialog and characters.

As a long time Tenchi and Ryoko fan let me say how nice it is to have discovered this story!! It has been a while since I dsicovered one this wonderful and had feared that the fandom was all but defunct! Write-on!