I like it, could you please update

Wow! Viktor is really Hot! I hope there would be more Viktor/Selene moments. And Im happy Selene give Kraven a painful beating there. I like this story very much, and I was assuming its not finish yet so please update more chapter and about the dialogue its really hard to understand whos really talking I think you can make spaces to recognize who's talking or if the scene is just a reminiscing.

I really like it, could you please update

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD!

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

MORE MORE MORE!

lol

I love this! Write more quickly! And lets have some Erika and Selene, those two are gagging for each other!

Oh, and the line: “Caw caw! I’m a giant bird-eating magpie-like vampire!” seriously amusing, how the hell are you gonna fit it in?

Yeah, this is definately interesting it's just a wee bit confusing at times. The plot doesn't suck, it's just unclear. But good job and keep at it. You'll do great.

AAHH! Go back to the room, Selene, go! omg! I SO wanna be her! Please please please, another chapter soon! More Viktor/Selene! Omg, i am SO jealous of her! LOL great job! Great Kraven bashing! Great way to have Selene realize she doesnt love Mike! It was brilliant! Post chapter 5 soon, I cant wait for for hotness between Viktor and Selene... lucky her.. LOL

I think you should put some Michael in, most definately... As for Kraven walking in on them, it would be mildly amusing for some good old fashioned Kraven beating... *grin*

Oh my goodness, I love this story. I think Kraven should walk in, most definitely.

Just one thing though;

Each time a different person talks, you want to start a new paragraph. This also helps cause sometimes it gets confusing as to who is talking when it's all in the same paragraph.

Anyway, keep the chapters coming. I really love this. It's original.

its good keep going

Aw, cliffhanger! Oohh, cant wait for next chapter! Ive been waiting forever for that, and here it is finally... update soon! *grins*