cool fan fic shame you have not updated for months though

These are really good I have always thought about how Jun could love such a dark and twisted man. I love all the characters especially the more important ones. Ithink you should do one of Nina write about her feelings on having a son and not being able to remember her past also how and why she hates Anna its just a suggestion.
Your fan Katzama*

Before Ling, Jun was always my favorite character. I was so surprised when I got Tekken 3 and discovered that she had had a son. I'd always wondered how exactly it happened and how she felt. I never thought about her and her actions the way you described it, but it all makes sense and I like it. In fact, I never thought of Hwaorang or Jin and their troubles the way you portrayed them.

Do you just write about whoever you want to at the moment? Or do you have a bunch of characters you like to ponder about? If you don't mind my saying, I think it would be interesting if you wrote about Asuka or Ling. In Asuka's Tekken 5 ending movie, it looks like she purifies Jin and I was curious to see what Angel would have to say about that. And with Ling, I just want to see a fresh view on her and her character. In her stage movies, she comes across as extremely childish and blind (to me, anyway), but her backstories make her character seem so much more interesting. Why would she cry over the death of someone she knows to be so evil as Heihachi? And sometimes I wonder if her feelings for Jin deserve a more positive or negative connotation. (ie. devoted friend vs. obsessed fangirl?)

Your stories are great and I love how they force me to think! ^_^

Wow!! your really good. =^.^=
I really like your fic. it really describes Hwoarang's personality. He is my fave character.

Anyway Keep it up!! your a great writer!

y'know? i felt kinda "meh" to Jun too..i mean, she was just always kinda there for me...until i read what u wrote now i like her...good job! keep up the good work this is one of my fav. ficcies.

Brilliant! oh my God you described Jun and her life exactly as i wished you to do! Jun doesn't appear many times, after all in T3 and T4 she is already dead, but i think she's one of the most important characters in Tekken series, besides some of my friends say that she is the best fighter in T2.
anyway this was really your best chapter (i liked Jin and Hwoarang, but because they are my favourite characters i always knew a bit more of them then from Jun!). Congratulations!

PS: i don't know if you know, but in one of my chapters i did thank you for your review and I also mantioned your pictures, because i check them out and i really like it! Ciao

wow! This story is so amazing! I love it!! Please update soon!! -x-

Damn that was good. Very analytical. We need more stories like this.

another good chapter!! You are really good at writing! me likey spiritual stories!! Please update soon! This story is amazing!

Wow! I really liked that chapter! This story is so dfferent to everything on ! its really really good!

Hey, i just wanted to say that i really liked your story. You've got mad skillz with writing. At any rate, it's a very unique look at the other characters. Angel is one of my fave characters and its really refreshing to see her narrating a story. At anyrate, if you like, you should read my story Tekken 5: Angels and Demons. anyway keep writing cuz it's really good!

Hey...I really liked your POV about Hwoarang's character! Hwoarang and Jin are my favourite characters (I mean characters)-I wonder why? :P :P but i also like Julia, Ling, Jun and Nina. I did notice a change in your chapter, but it was good the same way the first one was!
I do imagine Hwoarang like you, except I don't think he's stuck in one moment of his life...nervertheless i think you did a fabulous job here! update as soon as you can, because I'll be waiting to read more from Jun or Nina, ok?
Take care :D :D :D

Hey, this is truely a great thing to read about. If all the fighters actually took a lesson like this they wouldn't be fighting in the iron fist anymore I don't think...
Anyway, great work! I wish you could do Steve soon. ^^

Peace~

My dear mellon...What can I say that I havent already told me before?. The way you write is incredibly smooth to read. You describe each part as if you yourself were in it, body and soul. As for this particular story, I'm starting to learn more about Tekken from your stories and from your vast knowledge in it. Kinda like this character...the typical though-but-soft-inside guy. This type is always interesting to figure out, describe or even imagine...
Ok keep the good writting...and ppl read and REVIEW! MY mellon deserves it...
from a lonely wolf girl to a crazy mellon...
e.Carol

Oh. My. God. I am just so...speechless right now. I can't believe you aren't a native English speaker, as this story literally blows away all others. It's so smart, so very true to character and most of all so TRUE. Using Angel as a window into each character? Brilliant, just wish i'd thought of it. Wish i could make some observations about other characters to help you with your next chapter(s), but sadly i only care for Jin, and you've done a well enough job there! If you think about it, he seems to be the only well-rounded out, three dimensional character in the entire series; the other characters are pretty much flat, there either to add some machismo (Paul, Murdok), sex appeal (Christie, Nina) or humor (Panda, Mokujin). I hope you DO continue though, we get so few quality fics here!