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| Maiqu 2006-08-12 ch 11, | abuseUPDATE SOON!! |
| Ayana Starman 2006-08-07 ch 11, | abusegreat story update soon |
| ilovedrew88 2006-08-06 ch 11, | abuseI hope that Chris can get Gwen to talk about Drake. I hope that Drake won't hurt Chris. I'm glad that Chris was smart enough to figure out that she is being black mailed. Update again soon. |
| Witty-Kate 2006-08-05 ch 11, | abusecool chapter- aww no bonding talk lol just kidding update soon |
| othluver16 2006-08-04 ch 11, | abuseDrake is the devil! i don't get why gwen doesn't just use her magic to put a spell on him to forget about her... is drake like a demon or something? well i like how you write and i felt like i was right there with her! please update soon! |
| PrinceCharmed 2006-07-20 ch 10, | abuseAnother great installment! I really love this story, and I'm liking it more and more with every chapter. Things are really coming together well and I must commend you on a job well done thus far. It's nice, cause I didn't get around to reading this chapter til today, my birthday, and what a good birtrhday present it was! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| ilovedrew88 2006-07-16 ch 10, | abuseThat's kinda cool that goatman is Drake. I hope that the Charmed Ones can prevent Drake ffrom hurting Gwen anymore. It sucks that Drake is gonna try to hurt Chris if Gwen doesn't listen to him. Good thing he doesn't know Chris is a witch/whitelighter. Update again soon. |
| Witty-Kate 2006-07-14 ch 10, | abusewow that was really good! lol thta bonding thing still makes me laugh! is he going to tell leo he didnt sleep with her? n im surprised the charmed ones didnt pick up on him saying at leats u did it mentally lol its still funy chris didnt lie let leo got the completly wrong end of the stick lol sorry im gunna laugh about this for ages enjoy germany and update soon |
| PrinceCharmed 2006-07-10 ch 9, | abuseI'm a bit late to discovering this story, but I'm sure glad I did!! I love Chris and Chris-centric stories (partly cause I love the character, and partly cause I think Drew Fuller is totally droolworthy! lol) But anyway, I love this story, and I think you've written all the characters in it very well. A lot of stories I've read don't quite keep the characters we know and love IN CHARACTER, ya know what I mean? But you do a great job and I absolutely adore your character Gwen. She's a great original character with a real personality and story. No Mary Sues here! lol. The way the Charmed Ones met her when they thought she was a hapless innocent kinda reminded me of when Buffy met Faith on BtVS. I don't know if you're a fan of that or not, but I hope so! Gwen's confident exterior, yet somewhat scared and insecure interior also reminds me of Faith. Wow, I've written such a long review... lol. Basically what I'm trying to say here is I love your story, it's awesome, going straight to my favorites, hope you update soon and thanks for writing such a great story for my reading pleasure. PS: Oh yeah, I'm also putting it on my story alert list. :-D |
| Witty-Kate 2006-07-09 ch 9, | abusewow this is a really good stori! i thought the convo between chris and leo was so funi! it had be in stiches! updaet soon |
| ilovedrew88 2006-07-09 ch 9, | abuseIt's so funny that Cris convinced Leo that he and Gwen slept together. I wonder what is happening to Paige right now. I can't wait to find out. Update again soon. |
| Ayana Starman 2006-07-09 ch 9, | abusedramatic, chris' sarcasm is hilarious, update soon |
| ilovedrew88 2006-05-23 ch 8, | abuseI'm glad that Gwen was able to talk to Chris. It was funny that Phoebe started jumping up and down outside the restaurant window. Update again soon. |
| Original Michal 2006-05-22 ch 8, | abuseWOW! you haven't updated for a really long time. I was completely shocked when i saw that this had been updated! anyway... i like it.(: update soon! Michal. |
| Faith-charmer 2006-05-20 ch 8, | abuseGreat update! I liked their lil date and Phoebe's crazziness! Can't wait for you to update!! |