 kingmickymouse 2007-01-31 . chapter 3 i really like it so far. and if someone came after me w/a chainsaw i would run like hell and kick there ** later |
 Scherzo in C 2006-08-10 . chapter 7 Stories are still awesome! On to number . . . 7, I think. |
 lyokolady 2005-11-05 . chapter 7I just posted the first chapter of my third story and then I thought, "Why not go back and finished Janika's stories? I really liked the first two I read so the next ones must be great!" And so I read some. Your stories are excellent, intense and creative. I like the angle you took with the UlrichxJankiaxOdd triangle. I myself have my OC and Ulrich like each other but, people have urged me to continue with it. I even attracted a YumiXUlrich fan and she thought I did pretty well so I'll still go with that. Your characters go perfectly with the series. I find it the hardest to portray Ulrich's character and Odd's as the easist. Anyways, I have to get off the computer now. I've been updating and reading your stories for the past two hours so my brother's getting a bit impatient. Well, ttyl. I'll be back to finish the others later. Very creative with the pawn idea.
Eragon4Life |
 Onono 2005-10-08 . chapter 3Still good...srry I'm iming my friend about a flying lawn mower I saw at an airshow today. |
 Onono 2005-10-06 . chapter 2Before I read the Animorphs thing, I was about to mention it...lol i've read abotu 90% of the series, haven't read like 12 books...makes me wnt to think of a crossover..0_0 |
 Level1 CSI Stoaks 2005-02-24 . chapter 7Lots to say Lots to say! When did Nika become blond? You got a tattoo? I'm back in all my glory! But still can't e-mail you I'm Sorry! Ok um that's all really |
 The Bringer of Good Cheer 2005-02-14 . chapter 7You're trashing NEF? After all that work you two put into it? Well, maybe it wasn't your BEST work, but it certainly had potential!
Anyways, I really think you should continue with the whole new era thingy. There's only so many evil robots, killer rodents, and giant purple teddy bears that an evil super-computer can usurp before it realizes that it needs a new strategy! The ending to your story, I'll admit, was a tiny bit anti-climatic, but don't fret too much about that: it's REALLY hard to create tension in writing! Besides, name one TV show that had a first episode that was breathtaking from beggining to end, because that's esentially what your doing. Creating a new show out of an old show.
Oh, and Happy Valentine's Day! |
 dianna 2005-02-13 . chapter 7 yeah i have an older friend but shes only 12 she'll be thirteen next year. she says she'llbe at mcgarvin when its my first year but i'll only see her there for one year. |
 Lilyana Turner 2005-02-11 . chapter 7 HELLO? What are you, woman, ABSOLUTELY NUTTERS? Of COURSE you should keep up with the new era stuff--your story is basically the only one of its kind! I mean, think about it... girl- gets-thrown-into-boarding-school-and-falls-in-love-with-Odd seems to have become the standard (and who am I to talk? All My Brothers is just like that...)and so far your story has had only a hint of romance. And new monsters. And an intelligent non-hyper non-spastic heroine. And a slightly evolved X.A.N.A. So, unless you want to suffer death by peanut (er... inside joke... long story, sorry...) then you should DEFINATELY continue with the New Era stuff. Wow. That was long. Yeah, I'll go away now. |
 Kayrana 2005-02-11 . chapter 7Maybe it cuold start out as a regular X.A.N.A. attack and become a new Era thing. I don't know. Yay for updates!! |
 East Coast Ryder 2005-02-11 . chapter 7I prefer the New Era angle myself, but that's just me.
And I never said it was a canon character. I just said it wasn't a *new* character. *hint hint* |
 Saphire-089 2005-02-11 . chapter 7Whatever you want. |
 Black Cherry Soda 2005-02-11 . chapter 7 I know, but I just had to throw that one at you. I like the way you ended it. Don't stop now! I want to find out what will happen next! Who's gonna get their power next? I betcha it'll be Yumi, right?
PS: buy your own ice cream! |
 dantheman7777 2005-02-11 . chapter 7Hey, you know my opinion on that matter. Anyway, that ending was a little strange. It's just too peaceful for my tastes.
I like the way you made Jeremie talk in techno-bably. I understood every word he said. I would have done somethign like, "blah, blah, which acted as a control statement modifier for my search program when I ran it." I love techno-bably.
Keep writing. |
 Lobo-Chan 2005-02-10 . chapter 7Hey-ish, leave the rubber chicken alone-ish! Although your word dodgeing skills are very interesting-ish. Rub-chick beats elastisized poultry-ish. Yesh, your friend ish very wise-ish. |