 joyrid3 2007-12-31 . chapter 5Aw, no more? It's getting even more interesting! Can't wait for the update! Animeverse and mangaverse...now that was genius. And Yuya's transformation...the magical pretty girl attack names do suck, don't they? I remember one from Sailor Moon that one of the Sailor Stars (you know the men that turned into women) did sounded something like: "Star Gentle Uterus" XD
I'm wondering when Kyo's gonna get hit. I hope he does. Soon.
And Yay, Shinrei! Who's Pookie?
Happy New Year! |
 joyrid3 2007-12-31 . chapter 4Poor Kyo...I think you're making him even more masculinely...ahm *searches for the right word* egotistically stupid than he is :) I don't know if that string of words made any sense...
Anyway...Poor Sasuke. I would have liked it more if Kanashimi got to kiss Yukimura, since I'm not a YukimuraxSasuke fan *shudders* But since Sasuke's technically a girl now I guess it's ok...
I wonder what the Narrator did to Yuya and oh, Hotaru-chan was so brave! :) |
 joyrid3 2007-12-31 . chapter 3Aw...and I was hoping to see Kanashimi get playtime with Kyo. Yes, Sasuke, shield Yukimura! I have to say he's really in character (Yukimura) and I'm loving it! Props to you on the part about the frat boy and Jane Austen - that wonderful mix of opposites is part of why I love Yukimura! Well, that and he's gorgeous XD |
 joyrid3 2007-12-31 . chapter 2Well now, I know your sister was after Kyo, but now Yukimura too? NO! :) Sorry, fangirl moment.
By the way, I have one observation to make:
“KANASHIMI NO BISHONEN SUBJUGATION RYU...DUCT TAPE BIND!” - and only Kyo gets tied up. Yukimura's a bishonen too, so he should also be tied up, like Kyo.
By the way, in the part with Migeira and the little girl with pink pony tails - you scare me. That's a good thing.
And really, your sister's right - messing with fanservice means war!
I had a lot more to say, but due to the length of your chapters and the fact that I'm easily distracted, I forgot the other stuff ^_^ |
 joyrid3 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Oh, I went half-crazy when I saw the title and then the formulas (since I had my statistics AND econometrics final) THE HORROR! But all's well that ends well and since I got an "A-" I can't complain.
Now for the story: aw Benitora's cute as a dog! Can't he stay like that forever? XD At least that way he'll always be close to Yuya if she decides to keep him. Kyo is blindingly in character, I loved the "shut up" part. So simple, yet so efficient. That's Kyo for you.
*rushes to the next chapter* |
 Squiff 2007-01-07 . chapter 1If you don't update this soon, I'll cry ;-; |
 Kumiko Hasegawa 2006-08-03 . chapter 50_o
Erk! Brain. Overload. Crashing. (falls over twitching)
(shakes fist at Narrator) Update soon, or I'll, um.
Jeb: (strikes pose) You'll "um" her to death?
KH: (whacks troublesome figment of imagination over the head) Quiet you!
Jeb: (sniffs pathetically and goes to eat carrots)
KH: (rolls eyes) UPDATE! (sobs uncontrollably) I'm so bored! (whine)
Happy writing!
P.S. Akira is mine! (hiss) |
 Kumiko Hasegawa 2006-08-03 . chapter 1Can I have bunny Akira? I'll take good care of him!
Will read more when I have time...hilarious!
Happy writing! |
 Chi 2006-07-18 . chapter 5 OMG... PLEASE Update! Please...! I love this! Please update...! |
 Kaori 2006-07-07 . chapter 5 Brilliant! I love it! This made me laugh so hard, I think the neighbours are ready to use their iron skillet on me ;D
You said you're busy with RL, but will you be finishing this smeday? Even if it takes a while? *is hopeful* |
 summerbluez 2006-05-30 . chapter 5 That was freaking hilarious,i nearly laughed my head off at that!oh and erm...what exactly is the difference between the manga Shrinrei and the anime Shrinrei?what happened?Cuz i didnt read the manga series,only watched the anime.i thought shinrei removed the curse in the end?o_0*confused* |
 ELLIE 31773 2006-04-07 . chapter 5iTS a gerat one. I love it a lot then the other story that I have read in you fic. Why can you just turn Yuya into an animal insted of what is she become now would it be more intersting.But its your story. Ganbate for the new chapter. I hoap its soon. |
 abodo 2006-04-07 . chapter 5some people might say this is stupid and obvious and some people might have already said it but you took the title literally didn't you? |
 animegrl1047 2006-04-04 . chapter 5 AHAHAHAHAHA! (cracks up laughing from reading this hilariously written chapter, but realizes she's in thelibrary, so she shuts herself up)
Whew! That was the humor I needed for today! Anyway, sorry for not reviewing you for such a while... I was too busy doing a little thing I hate to do called homework for sophomore year and I feel dead already
(blame the teachers for bombaring the kids with homework...)
Anyway, I'm sure readers will forgive you updating for a long time and I'm sure they'll understand. Besides, I hope you get into one the Grad schools! Ganbatte!
Oh, a little side note for Kanashimi: How long HAS it been since you saw your Pookie? (And based on what your sister said, I bet you have a lot...) Besides, I'm betting you're still...
(pause)
Erk... how do I put this... I know I'll be beaten up later...
Okay, never mind. Let's just say I was thinking about my younger sister and how she tortures the Inuyasha men (and... don't ask. She tortures Sesshomaru with cockroaches and she loves the reaction from him... And I know it was over in Japan (I meant the anime.).)
(sighs) Okay, I think I said too much.
Keep up the good work, Narrator-san and I hope you get into one of the graduation schools! |
 Erin Elric 2006-03-27 . chapter 5Up date soon! And yes I am easy ammused. |