You have some very interesting ideas here, and you express them well. This was an excellent story which I enjoyed immensely.

Yet again a brilliant story. I love this one as well. Write more!

Wonderful, beautiful. I love the idea of Lucifer stuck in his human form, prone to the weakness and pain of the world in which he usually frolicks with malicious glee. Well done.

Ah, terrific devil angst! I would grovel for another story in this series. In fact I AM groveling for it, 'cause there just isn't enough good slashy Brimstone fic out there, darn it!

Interesting...A well done Zeke, however the Devil was not as believable. Good, but not wonderful.