Ooh, I really liked this. Great plot, very classic.

hey! i have a few things for you: one, i like the story. two, do you have a beta? cause it's kinda choppy and doesn't make sense sometimes. three, you said bailey went to work from 3-8, but she was back at home for dinner at 7. just thought i should point that out!!

wow! that was cool... hope ya continue ritin

Amazing!

i like the way you use the original novels as the back story. seems like most people don't. also, i like that you brought ned in, too bad you waited until the end! i totally wasn't expecting the ending.

You really shoudn't say 'Will the hardys find the girls before Bailey finishes them off' in the summary because that gives a clue that Bailey the bad guy before you even read the part where you find out bailey's a bad guy. It's like reading the summary on the back of a mystery book and it saying 'the best friend did it'

You write really well, but some of the circumstances seemed a little too uncaring for Nancy, i mean she went shopping while her friends were missing!! don't get me wrong, u needed to do it to make your story as good as it was. ...i'm sure this comes up alot, but i would suggest feelings and maybe even action, like a kiss between nancy and frank;not any x rated junk or anything, something like what u put in the end, and ned and callie...well...they don't have to be in there-of course if u like ned&nacny it doesn't really matter; u write really well!

There was a few grammar mistakes and things like that. There were also quite a few plot holes and other things that didn't seem quite right, but since this was your first story and its already finished anyway, I'll ignore them.

Good job. =]]

Really like the story

Wow that was awsome!

I loved it!

keep up the wonderful work!

cya!

You need more Nnacy and Frank romance! Other then that the mystery itself was really good and kept me reading.

Sorry I took so long to read these last chapters. Not a bad ending. And I definitely didn't suspect Bailey.

THANK U THANK U THANK U! Love the ending...totally fabulous...best thing that happened to me this uh...week! Glad Nancy and Ned weren't having troubles..oh crud, my sister's home(the computer is in her room and she's gonna kick me out) I'll review again to a chapter I never reviewed to give my ideas. Nancy is going to be in the next story isn't she? You really should add one more chapter...it just needs a little more...I can't tell why though..it just does.Gotta run NOW! I wuz here. Love Ya Lots Lots Lots(for putting Ned in as a good guy), and until next time, Bye

I thought this was a wonderful story and I'm glad to see a happy ending. I thought the little touch with Ned was really nice and I know it made some people very happy. I happily await your next story. I think you do a wonderful job of writing and you pace the story very well. And it's okay if it takes you that long to write the story. The important thing is that you finished it and you didn't leave your fans hanging. Again, congratualtions on completion on a wonderful story!

Cheesey, I mean, the snow on the first day of christmas & everything but that was a good story & I'm looking forward to next since it'll be more about Frank & Joe.