I loved this chapter. It was incrediblely sad yes, but still wonderful. I can't wait for the next update.

Mel, you already know that I just love it.

The last part you added was so beautiful and sad.

Love ya!

Wow. This. Rocked.

*is speechless*

xx

Kat

*sniffs*

So pretty, Mel...I needed a good fluffy Lit fic to get me out of my depression. So thank you:)

You gave us a glimpse of what could have been. Had AS-P not been the evil creature that she's become.

And Rory and Jess slow dancing...aw

A big thumbs up!

Brenda:)

Hey! This is Kat from the lit thread over at stars hollow. Just saw this fic banner on your sig and clicked it! Im so glad I did!

This was amazing! I love you, i love you, i love you! Please write more soon! sque!

xx

Kat

I'm glad she didn't just turn to mush when she saw he was back, but questioned him.

Favorite line: It had to be searched for, and you had to know how to find it, but it was there in its rawest form.

I LOVE that. 'sigh'

Aww this is so cutesome(i really need a new word)and just a great Lit to read. This shall go into the files of Selina world, where this did happen and JessandRory are together now.

I'm going with the flow and telling you that I like it. Since this is Jess we're talking about, I think he has his ways of sneaking in and out of school unnoticed.

Are you planning on continuing this, or leaving it as a stand alone?

Later.

:)

M.

I love it! I am so in love with Jess and Rory!

How does Jess get into the dance? Since he didn't graduate he shouldn't have been aloud in. Happy writing!

aw, that was adorable. a realistic take on the stars hollow high prom scene. keep it up!

Aw so cute can't wait for the next chapter

Oh, I hope you're going somewhere with this. As lovely a one-shot as it is, I live for it-could-work Rory/Jess. I'm not entirely sure what I think of Rory "seeing everything in Jess's eyes," but I love how you characterize Rory herself, and how you set the scene. Yay you.

Hey I really really liked this story. Hope u write more chapters. :)

oh i like that story. i like it, that you compar his love with those things with his eyes and the door and so on...

very very good!