great story but you should make the chapters longer. well anyway get the next part up soon.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE...

Satoshi: O.O How long has she been at it?

Yuu: two hours O.O

Ginta: when will she stop? O.O

Na-Chan: obviously when the writer updates her story

All: UPDATE PLEASE!

I love the quiet tension. Maybe you could add in a little on what Miki's thinking about? Perhaps.

Laterz. And thanks a lot for reviewing my Musical... Chapter three is my MOST favorite in it... Aladdin scenes are some much fun to write.

Really, Laterz.

There isn't much to comment on. It was way short. But I hope you type another one soon, it(I am only giveing advice, please don't be mad) would probably be a good idea to make the next chapter longer. Keep up the good work! :D

Oh.. meesa enjoyed that very much... see you tomorrow... lol... guess who i am?

~Dru~

good one!

I like the DORK! part... :-), I know I'm easily amused. LATERZ, thanks for updating it, too.

Nice chapter, i'm glad you updated. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I really liked this alot, can't wait for the next chapter!

YEA!
Sorry about the outburst. Great chapter and it's has my mind starting to reel in the possiblity of my own MB fanfic. It might happen. I like Miki's thoughts in this chapter. Laterz. Keep on writing.

Wow! Pretty good story! Can't wait for more! I wonder what will happen next? (I think you got the "stares" mixed up in your spelling, "stares" are supposed to be stairs, and "stair" is supposed to be stare.) There was an awful lot of spelling mistakes...

i liked it..it was very kawaii...please keep up the good work!

okay, a good start. i like where you picked the story up but there are many unexplained things. 1. Miki's father's paternal rage against Yuu's affection, how has he coped with it. He seemed "cool" with this guy 'stealing' his ONLY daughter away from him. 2. Yuu and his parents feelings toward each other, he must have a lot of pent up feelings for them...over six years worth, right. 3. same with Miki but just not as long, don't forget that they lied to them. 4. Yuu needs to make Miki anger more often. That's what makes Yuu well, Yuu. You do have some spelling and grammar mistakes that you might want to change but it was a very good opening chapter still and I can't wait for the next one. Laterz.

~TheShadow(justDISSAPPEARED)

I like your story a lot! It's really good, but the only problem I see is that there are a lot of spelling mistakes. other than that, nothing that i could think of!

It is a great story if I should say so myself! Its my first and im happi with it so, ya! read it and enjoy there will be more