Aiyah! This too-too good story come back from grave!
You is go bad place if you no continue to tell what Shampoo do now to boy/girl Ranma!
So you be good to Tuisto and fans, and make more fic'y, yes?


Bai-Bai!








A+ work.

When I first read this story (long, long ago), I was a Ranma 1/2 fan, with a little knowledge of the other anime you reference throughout and no exposure to DnD. I adored it, and it lingered in my memory for many years.
I came across it again recently, now battle-hardened by many a campaign across the Great Wheel, and everything I loved about it was swept up and brought together with my new appreciation of the elements involved.
I love this story and my only complaint is that I think that you didn't have quite as much fun with the Ranma/Ryoga thing as you could have... although his last appearance might suggest that that isn't quite as over as it might be...
As I said, it's all wonderful.

great story

Ahh, now this is a fic I've been looking forward to seeing updated, and lo, it updates! Twice, even...

Nice to see it continue after a hiatus of years without much of a hiccup in the writing. That's usually an issue after a long pause, but not here; only the screwy formatting (which FFNet is to blame on) seperates the old chapters from the new.

It's really wonderful to see some of these stories come back to life. I applaud you.

Apparently, Shampoo's coming is what Nabiki foresaw? One wonders how she intends to deal with the situation. Also, where's Ryoga? Didn't he just figure out that he was supposed to guard Ranma? I'm surprised he didn't show up.

-- Pat

A nice chapter 21

Greatness, I reread everything after seeing this was updated. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think that you must put a few more spaces in your stories.

Kinai.

Great story, great chapter!!

Interesting choice for Shampoo, but Aisha Clan Clan a goddess? That could be an interesting blessing indeed.

As always glad to see more for this story.

Groovy. Maybe it is fair to say you did well for the chapters

Well now. This has been a very engaging story, and promises to continue being interesting in chapters to come. I'm glad I decided to stick with this story past the little formatting problem of earlier chapters.

Hehe... Looks like 'little' Ranma doesn't know what s/he actually is yet. That might be changing soon though, as everyone else close to him seems to be catching on.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to more of this story! :D

I can't begin to tell you how thrilled I am to see you're working on your unfinished fanfics again. You are hands-down one of the best Ranma fan fiction writers out there.

As for this new chapter; I was just re-reading the story since I've finally taken the plunge and started checking out D&D (never knew anyone growing up who played, so I missed out on it), and the new chapter flows seamlessly from the old ones. Well-written, and you did a good job picking up where you left off.

Thanks again for the stories, I know you've been working on original material, if anything's been published yet please PM or email me with the details cause I'd love to see it.

Gah!

Concept is interesting, and what I saw of the dialogue seemed decent, but please, PLEASE, fix the formatting so that there are spaces between your paragraghs. The current effect is so ** my eyes I couldn't stay focussed on the story much farther than finding out that Kasumi was a priestess of Beldandy.

That being said, I will try to read the story proper in its current format anyway, because (other than the eyestrain) I do like what I see so far.

Another awesome story update. You've made me a very happy man over the last week or so! The thing that stuck out the most for me in this chapter was Ryouga's revelation about Ranma. It's going to take a lot of soul searching on his part to come to terms with it I'd imagine. I also have to admire this Nabiki a LOT, she's earned it.