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| FanFictionFanatic 2007-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts nice; but based on the manga, so I don't quite get it too much since I've only seen the Anime. Nice anyway though- for any RoyAi addict. |
| AcidAngelTears 2006-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseLove it! I miss Hughes so much! And I love this ^^: 'Hughes was silent, which unnerved him more. God, he would have taken five hours of photo albums at this point.' |
| Lanati 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked the format of this. It was simple and fun to read through, well done! : ) I loved Hughes, though I honestly teared up when he talked about his family. Everyone was in character, well written! Keep it up! XD |
| Nilmiel 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseNil: lol, i loved it! That was hysterical. It was well written, and you did a good job keeping them in character. I see you based it off the manga, which rocked my world. lol, that was awesome. |
| een nihc 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseHaha... Maes was funny. An enjoyable read all in all. Thanks for writing this. |
| sleepykittycat 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseKyaa~! This is so kawaii! Thank you for writing such a beautiful little story. I enjoyed it very much. ^^ |
| shinigamivc 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseheh, me n' my budds have done the ghost hughes thing before in an rp. I love that so much XD |
| MoonStarDutchess 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseCoolness. Great story |
| Fyliwion 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is ADORABLE and I love Hughs.. to well.. I guess we could say death since it was my love of Hughs that made me go search for the next scan with him and come across ed in nice huge letters scream "Hugh's is dead?!?" and me promptly fall out of the chair and bawl... *sniffles* But this... this is so adorable and I dunno somehow makes it really lighthearted ^^ Very sweet |
| Haein 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseExtremely wonderful story, with Hughes and Royai, a combination which I like VERY MUCH!! XD XD |
| sakurapixi 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseAw. That was definitely a cute fic, I really enjoyed it. Man, I love how you portrayed Hughes in this one. He hasn't changed a bit. And I love this part ... "I'm glad that you're all right." Hughes proceeded to do backflips in the air. THAT IS SO RANDOM! Hahah, I love it alot. This fic made me smile like crazy ... hehe. Chicken soup, eh? I'd love to have some right now. M. The Heaven scene with the --"And they all lived happily ever after," Hughes announced, waving around his arms wildly to make a point. "And it was all thanks to moi."-- was pure love. I'm serious. I'm glad that you put your heart into this fic, despite the fact that it was hard to write. Definitely a fave for me ... Thank you. =) |
| QueenBrooke 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was amazing. I'm adding it to my C2 right now. You used my two favorite Royai bits from the manga and i loved the way you added Maes into it. |
| guest 2005-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so well written... from how the characters are represented to the possible plot line, it's definitely something that could happn in FMA. I'm so glad you didn't have them unrealistically say "I love you" after she invites him in for soup :-P |
| A Different Life 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuselove it! |
| JadeStarDragon 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseWOW! |