Your dark fics are just SO good all the time! The ideas are so different each time too! You were made to write Dark Luke. I usually like it when Mara is left alive and not "submissively" in love with him making her OOC.

Other than a few things repeated very often, I don't see why you're dissapointed in this at all. the second person is so wondrfully refreshing and perfectly done, and the plot is excellent. This is over all very, very, very good.

I liked this. It was really good.

Wow. Horrible, but beautiful. No reall ending, but I guess that was the point.

MTFBWY,

Saber Girl Leia

Wow...not much else to say but, wow.

Good job. I always like a good Dark Luke story.

DMS

::sniffs a bit::

dammit, vader-incarnate, you always do that to me! for some reason, i love your twisted luke/mara stories. no, i know why, i love that you describe luke as hot. sure, han is great and all, but luke is mighty fine too! this was well-handled, the idea that luke started out trying to help a very interesting one. and i like that mara thinks leia was his lover, and that he blew up tatooine. i'm sorry, though, a THIRD death star? hopefully he made the plans better than the last two.

loved it. going back to read your other stories again. ;)

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE! I thought at the first part that you might be talking about Vader and Amidala...good job on that one. lol This is really good!