Hehehehe. This an ...interesting story. You actually wrote this very well. I hope you update soon. I'm curious to see what you do with the story.

*bows to the master of DMC ff*

Oh you are just so.. with the descriptiveness! Like that sentence makes any sense at all.. I laughed, drooled, and flushed all at the same time! This is definately a good fic so far!

“There’s plenty of room,” Dante purred at my ear, “You just have to know how to wiggle around.” *faints & dies*
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oh yeah... Bodily fluids!! Thought I'd forgot din'cha?

oh I've SO missed reading your work! MUST get around to going thru ya journal. You are TOO talented to be stuck in this hellhole mate. Really.

The red coverlet! *clutches* It matches my green one so well! Very good starting chappa and you're gonna continue yes? *prods* On to ch. 2

Good God, this girl is frikkin lucky as hell! *Replaces Jayden with herself instead* mwahahaha! Nice job. ^_^

Oh gosh such a sweet chapter you have here. I cant wait to see what you will put into the next chapter please updaet soon!

yeah not bad. you need more reviews.

Good story... It really shows a side of Dante that we never really get to see. Hope you will continue to write for this story, but if you want to leave it as is thats fint too. Keep up the good work.