this is an amazing fanfic you've started, i hope you update soon, cos i can't wait to see what happens next ^_^

interesting story! i'm really looking forward to see where this is going so i hope you update soon! good luck!

love it so far! can't wait for more.

Agh!! I wanna read more! I need to know what happens!!

You're doing pretty well, I'm interested in what happens next, it's pre-bdm, River's touched in the wits and you write her well, it's all good. I did notice that it started out rather abruptly but the hardest part of a story is the beginning and I really can't fault you for that. I like it. Keep up the good work.

This is great, Update soon!

Amanda

why arent you continuing? i really want to read more!! please!!

This is very good. I like the way you have inserted this mystery girl into the crew. I especially like the way Inara seems to not like her from sight. Jealous? You have the voice of the crew down pretty well. Jayne is obvious to fall for her, but maybe he'll play nice? please write some more. I'm looking forward to reading it!

Oh, me like Jayne. I think I need to see this show so I can swoon over him. Hehehe. Its a really good fic and I can't wait for the next chapter. *jumping up and down* E!

So far, so good. Can't wait to read more.