Nice way to end the story. I could almost feel Maggie fear myself and found that I was holding my breath while I was reading. Beth Palladino

That's so sweet

you are so right the best way to conquer your fears is face them head on, wish I could do that with all my fears

Ouch, Abe's gonna be guilty in the morning...

That was very nice... until the end bit. Then it just got a sad (good sad, well written sad, but still sad.)

Looking forwards to more, as usual.

Great chapter. Loved the paternal Hellboy. Poor Abe and Maggie, they just can't get very far. I hope the rest comes soon. Beth Palladino

Can't wait for the next chapter so hurry with it please so I can find out how Maggie is able to sleep in the water

Great Chapter. Even Manning starting to come out OK. Do we get to see the Surprise soon? Beth

Yayness! This was a good chapter. Hehehe I liked the end, considering Manning yelled at her for throwing parties.

What is with everyone and molesting Abe? And now the evil, groping woman is loose again? Shudder. Keep writing, this gets more and more fun. I envy your ability to stick with this, mine have come to something of a standstill...

Beautiful chapter, yay! Terrible cliff-hanger, boo! Now I have to wait for more... Thanks for posting, Beth Palladino

took all the patience I had (AND BELIEVE ME THERE'S NOT MUCH LEFT OF THEM)but I made it through the wait good chapter! I like how Abe changes Maggie's dream to something happy that was really clever! Please hurry with the next

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Dragoneyes/Elaine D

You updated! You are officially my hero!

GOOD ONE! My internet has been down a few days and I don't know how long until it's back but this is a very good chapter KEEP IT UP! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT ONE OK

This just keeps getting better and better. Keep it up and I will love you for life. Beth Palladino

Beautiful chapters. Bad place to stop. More soon I hope. Beth Palladino

why aren't you on the just in/hellboy list? strange GOOD CHAPTERS KEEP IT UP!