if you want, I can help you. I could do this story for you. Chapter one was okay. chapters two and three were bad because you got the wrong people. here are the reasons( no a fence at all)

1: Ranma will never listen to his father because he is lazy.

2: Happossai is a bad one to because of all the preverted things he did to Ranma's Female Form.

Kasumi, Nodoka, And Dr. Onu Tofu. those three people Ranma will be willing to listen to.

Ha! Charles Dickens. Never fails to entertain.

I have got to say that this FIC has got me hooked,I hope you continue! _ !MERRY CHRISTMAS!

It wasn't really that bad. A panda asthe ghsot of the past was a nice touch.

MORE PLEASE! I think it is a fabulous and fun idea! I would love to read more of it! Please, please, please!

Ciao!

Ok so you choose a dickens work and not his best at that ;). I will wait and see what you do with this one, but being that you are using a predectiable format you may want to throw in some suprises that will catch people of guard. Doing so will give you a chance to get more readers and find your footing in the rough world of fan fiction.

This really sounds interesting. Please keep on writing!

Update soon! I really want to know what happens next. _

Genma was pretty funny in this chapter. So was Akena and Ranma's arguement.

This is really, really interesting! It is also quite funny, hat's off to you! Just make sure the spirits don't become too much of a catalyst and this will be a gem!

Tiney