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| heyhey 2006-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGet a ** beta reader. Your knowledge of English is horrible. You use words that you think are correct and that sound like the word that you mean to use. And, worst of all, your grammar is just disgusting. |
| LostNovember 2006-01-29 ch 15,  | abuseWow this is such a beautiful ending! Love it! Thank you for giving us a wonderful reading! |
| jtbwriter 2006-01-29 ch 15, | abuseThat was sweet-thanks for a very happy ending! |
| UnspokenLoves 2006-01-29 ch 15, | abusenice job hun...a very good job |
| ToMyGrave 2005-10-30 ch 14, | abuseCute chapter! Grissom is so sweet. I really like the end. So good, so sweet. Keep it up! |
| untapdtreasure81 2005-10-29 ch 14, | abusethis is a beautiful fic...would love to see him take her to paris...*sigh* Wish somebody would take me to paris...oh well. I can wait for this to be completed I guess anyway. Sassy |
| Shortymae 2005-10-29 ch 14, | abuseAwesome! Keep 'em coming! :) |
| Any 2005-10-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseI don;t know what to say about that Lady Heather..Maybe he is right..Maybe he tell the truth...But it did happen...Damn! |
| Any 2005-10-16 ch 11, anon. | abuseSara leave Gil's house...Does it mean that she don't know how to do next...Gil once said he didn't know how to do it?...How could a man don't know? Does he has a childhood that Sara never see before? |
| Any 2005-10-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseI like Gil, if not more than, at least as the way I like Sara…I feel sad when seeing them apart…Is it only the death that let them know how important they to each other? Why kind people like them couldn’t get normal life？They both deserver that! |
| geeklover 2005-09-10 ch 13, | abuseThis is a really cute chapter!! I don't think it's a boring chapter at all!! The dialogue is really well written. I know that now the school has started again you want to write and I would say be my guest but don't forget school. weird sentence right haha. well I see you soon and never stop writing ever again!! byebye Geeklover |
| Eden Eyes 2005-09-09 ch 13, | abuseOMG! I loved it hun, it was awesome! Keep up the AWESOME work! |
| Kaylee 2005-09-09 ch 13, anon. | abuseGood Good! I know I'm late on reviewing but I loved it..if you get any time, please do update! Thanks for reading! Kaylee |
| ToMyGrave 2005-09-08 ch 13, | abuseThis is such a late review, but I love this story! Glad you updated it and please, write more! |
| Suisidle 2005-09-08 ch 13, | abuseHI! it's such a beautiful chapter.. I love the song "Forgive Me" by Evanescence.. made me cry. good work! :) |