| Reviews for Watcher |
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Cathy Crimson 5/24/13 . chapter 15 I love how you make Harry sound both smart and cold (watcher suits him perfectly!), it makes me happy that someone changed his character, in my oppinion Harry was far too normal before. I still like the ornginal books very much but this story is interesting. The character seems more original and I like it how you write from different perspectives. You have great potential Mira, I will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. /Cathy Ps. The devil is more honest than god because the truth hurts more- but that doesn't mean he doesn't lie. I've allways preffered the devil to god- I feel he is much more intelligent. Have you noticed how all angels have the same face? I somehow don't know if their smiles are true or feke but you can never trust the devil, thats why he doesn't leave the opption of being betrayed. Thank you for writing this awesome story about a boy who's not a demon n'or an angel but who still wants to change the world. |
kahurikuul 3/31/13 . chapter 5I am curious why you Blaise Zabini a girl? Any particular reason? Anyway, I love this fic, I truly do. You're spinning the story in an intriguing way. I'll wait until I've read more to write a more thorough review, but I can already see it's heading in a interesting direction. |
Math-lv 3/18/13 . chapter 15Innteresting story you have here. Its a pity, there hasn't been an update for 6 years (so probably there wont be one). |
Kali Chadburn 2/10/13 . chapter 3My gosh, your English is better than most people I know that have English as their first language! I salute you and your amazingness. I like your writing and I like the plot, and I like that you're amazing. So, yep, positive review-ness from me over here. |
Guest 1/18/13 . chapter 1 i hate snape |
ibterismith50 1/6/13 . chapter 15Would love to read more. |
PotterFrkInTx 12/27/12 . chapter 15Just started reading your story tonight, but I am intrigued with how it's going. I do have a few criticisms for you tho... you keep jumping around alot, going from one point of view to another. Either that or I'm just not following like I should be... I dunno. Anyways, keep up the good work and I look forward to your next installment! |
SicilyRoyalty 12/19/12 . chapter 8I love the italized parts in the beginning! Adds a sense of mystery to the fic! |
SicilyRoyalty 12/19/12 . chapter 6This is, by far, the most intriguing harry potter fanfic I read in a long while! I hope you update it soon! |
SicilyRoyalty 12/19/12 . chapter 4Dare I say it, can Ron and Malfoy be FRIENDS?! That will definitely be a first! |
SicilyRoyalty 12/19/12 . chapter 2Interesting... |
kellelizro 11/10/12 . chapter 15I know you said you won't give up, but it has been a VERY long time so... maybe reassure people. By the way I love your story. |
Guest 8/28/12 . chapter 15 While I have not read all fanfic this one seems original. (A very rare occurence) I look forward to seeing more chapters. |
Larisya 6/14/12 . chapter 15I suppose hoping five years isn't too long is asking too much? That was a cruelly evil way to end if you have no intention of finishing. And I was enjoying it so much too... |
Larisya 6/13/12 . chapter 3I have to admit, I rather like... erm, really love, your take on Harry. Also, I admit to praising the heavens for the lack of spectacles. You are absolutely correct, it would not fit. At all. I adore your story, and I am rather glad you're foreign. It helps me not want to throttle something at every grammatical err. Mostly due to the grammatical atrocities I myself have committed in French and Spanish. |