ROY! NO I LUV HIM! HE CAN'T DIE! WAAAH!

Ahhhw...he actually did die ;( jeez..this is sad...

Amusing but sad fic! ;(

NNNOOOOOOOOO! holy CRRUUUD! ROYYYY!

Holy crap. That voice..poor Roy! ;(

ROYS A KILLER!

MY FAV. MELEE-SMASHER IS A KILLER!

whoa...SNAAP!

Oh, jeez xD Peach and Roy...bleegh. Dammit, Roy is miiiiiiinee!(and marth xD)

"Hey," He whispered into my ear. "You can read minds right? Can you tell us what she's thinking?" I shook my head. I didn't want to see what she was thinking.

XD i think no1 would..

XD BAHAHA, Ness! XD hes so cute :3 hed die..lol!

I banged my head on the floor and almost barfed up my food. At least they weren't, like, making out. I would die.

Literally.

Peach moved her fingers over Roy's neck and felt the marks, again. I was actually pissed at seeing her touching him like that. On his neck! What? This wasn't a soap opera! I didn't need to see this.

Epic hilarity x) he fell..lol ahh, nessy..

Oh Geez... :o

Lilina is MEAN! she and Peach could be best buds for being major witches to Roy...ugh. Anyways great job ;3 i love how ness is all..detective-y x3

Ahwwwwww poor Roy..

He has a hard life :(

OMG! This was an awesome story! Good job! :D

evil marth!

Loved the story! I originally read it because it was about Ness, but it turned out great anyway. The thing I disliked the most was that you made Roy die in the end- I practically cried. Also now there won't be a sequel. Another thing I noticed (mostly about all ssbm fanfics) is that the writers neglect to have the characters use there fighting abilities like in the games. I thought of an alternate ending where Ness uses his psychic powers to save Roy in the end (Just to compensate for that empty feeling I have)

Thanks for writing such a great fanfiction!

If you can cry writing your own story, then you've got major talent and it really shows here.

I like knives too,I also like Knives from Trigun. They're so sharp...sharp...

roy reminds me of lucy more and more each chapter. So sadistic and murderous, haunted by a dark past, no where to run, killing to ease your pain. Wanting death over life...